Thou Shall Not Die

Actually am interested to see how this goes.

overall its not to bad, but the dialog between characters feels off like im reading a movie script and i would have preferred if he went mihawk style instead of getting a crew but that is just me over all a pretty good book though not for me.

So a few things, it is well written despite alot of it being AI, it seems to be heavily edited, you can't tell unless you look. The only thing I dont like about this story is the MC handing out everything on a plate. He give's breathing styles to Kuina and Zoro, water and moon to former (which doesnt make sense since moon is mostly demon arts) and then beast breathing to the latter, then teaches the Hinokami Kagura to Bonnie. It's a good story but I came in with different expectations.

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I like it's concept , don't dropped this Author

I feel like the author is deliberately lowering the quality of his own story. The addition of unimportant aspects that are not related to the world is still tolerable but come on, a three meter katana, the aspect of an external god, the influence of other stories outside of One Piece other than the template that the MC has. The quality has really decreased, even before the canon begins. Even if using the god template, the laws of the world should still affect the MC, but all I see are various random aspects to elevate the MC's status through ridiculous means. The addition of unreasonable aspects, instead of maximizing the use of the template using existing resources, the MC instead makes his own way using various additions given by the author with justification through poetic-sounding writing so that readers can enjoy it?

It’s Good. Please don’t Drop and Delete this.

I understand the premise of MC over power, but everything falls into his hands without the slightest effort or development. Just think is, brainrot history

This is really really good 😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Normally, I try not to judge a story too soon, but this story is damn impressive that I felt the urge to write one. First of all, good writing, good pacing. The way you write the motivations and their wills is good . Also you've given two incredible templates as well . My only request is to keep him pure by that I mean no devil fruit. Also, I like the fact that you've started his journey alone. Keep it up . Hope it doesn't get dropped

so far it's good, don't drop it..🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I don't know what is wrong with the author brain, he manage to cook two of my favorite stories. So i give him 5 stars, I hope unlike the other book he won't drop this book.

As long as he is the one that kills kaido with his sword then this is 5 stars for me… —————————————————————————————————-————————————————————————————————————————————————————-

Although the stale dialogue, bland fights, scum crew are dragging it down this is a pretty good idea.