The Half-Blood Prince's Quest{HIATUS/UNDERGOING REWRITE}
A guy dies and floats in nothingness for a long time almost driven to insanity there but it gets better when he wakes in the body of one young Severus Snape. Determined to never die again, he sets out on the path to immortality doing whatever it takes to achieve it. Features a Snape SI-OC, Calm Mc, Anti-hero Mc.
No Harem.
Long Chapter 5k- 10 words per ch.
Update rate: Slow, once a week.
Slow paced story progression
Inspired by Dio Black's Half-Blood Emperor and Ouroboros Record ~Circus of Oubeniel~.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Note: English is not my first language so I might make mistakes and storytelling might seem rigid but I will do my best to improve.
Constructive criticism appreciated.
Also posting this on fanfiction.net under the same name.
Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13637790/1/The-Half-Blood-Prince-s-Quest
And Royalroad.
Giving myself 5 stars because I can...... Anyway this is my second attempt at writing and I hope I have gotten better. I got this idea when a reader of mine suggested it and it didn't leave my mind. This is the result of it. This fic was inspired partly by Dio Black's Half-Blood emperor and partly by Ouroboros Record ~Circus of Oubeniel~. I am a newbie at writing and English is not my first language so you can expect some errors which I will try my best not to make. Thanks for reading and any form of constructive criticism is appreciated.
Love the Author's other fanfic so I had high hopes for this one and Cat definitely delivered. Love the way are Reincarnated MC got sent to the Harry Potter Universe and I see his Goal of Immortality rational after what he experienced. I for one would want to achieve immortality if I was in his shoes. The first chapter is well written & I love the plot definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes in the future.
Writing Quality- Very good, I couldn't find any mistakes. Hopefully, this quality keeps up. Stability of Updates- Only 1 chapter right now so I don't really know. Story Development- Pretty good, so far seems promising. Character Design- This is a perfect model of a Slytherin. Or if you rather someone who would go to any means to complete his goal, nothing is off-limits. World Background- So far seem's very shallow but like I said earlier only 1 chapter has come out. But this has a lot of promise if its anything like Half-Blood Emperor.
If this is half as good as circus of oubeniel And has human experimentatiaon
Fan of ur other ****, so this be good to too [ hopefully] PLUS SI severus is dope. Just make Smart like in ur other bk,,,and if possible give him happiness in this. And make it so the chick is there for him in his weakest moments and ****...and not leave him And if possible bash lily and the maruaders [sensibly]. GL
good story but slow releases. .
Alright so this is my second review. The only thing I do not like is the stability of updates but the writing quality makes up for it. So overall this is my score for this story currently
Great grammar, not an idiotic wannabe hero MC, Morally Grey MC... Need I say more? Ah yes, how can I forget.... it's bloody SNAPE!!! I love snape. I like how the author portrayed the characters (the ones that have been introduced so far) and how the MC's presence is going to affect them. I think everyone should give it a try.
Inly read the first chapter. Chapters are long and there are no major grammatical errors. The spacings for each paragraph and not too long. There is a long term goal which he works towards. Made clear whether there would be harem or not (no harem).
What i must to say, its interesting novel , the writing quality is good , and why you dont update for 1 month ...... And always stupid rules with 150 words
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I'm hoping MC doesn't gain morals or feelings because of lily. It looks like Snape will be better at mind magic than his original if he already has a mind palace
A really good, excellently written hp fic where Mc is transmigrated into the body of Snape. What more could you ask for? I eagerly await for the new chapters and you have my full support.
Just checked it out and as expected its another brilliantly written story. The word count is a plus. The concept is fresh and nothing much was ever explored in Marauder's era so this would be interesting to read. The fact that you took inspiration from Oubenials circus sealed the deal and this gets an automatic 5 stars. I really really like this and hope you never drop it. Thanks for your hard work Author-san.
As fan of your other work, I checked this out and I have to say, its really good. The chapter was immersive and the concept is new. An Si as a Snape, there are so many things you can do with that. A snape not bound by morals seems dope and I hope you continue this. I have high expectations for this and can't wait for more.