First of all, Thank you for people who wants read my novel
Second, I hope everyone support me
Third, I deeply sorry for a mistake I make here and there in the Novel
Last, Please enjoy if you like my Novel
I will keep improving my self to be a better at writing
5 years ago
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Vynris_Foxtail
Needs more editing...
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5 years ago
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The_Procrastinator
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5 years ago
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Zenobia
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I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
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5 years ago
0
Viet_Phan_9278
It seems to be a good story. Although wish you would have some more chapters in it. Why does this thing need 140 letters. You would think any review would be taken but no you need 140 letters.
5 years ago
0
Apocalypse_
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A fun read. Great to pass time.
Grammar needs to improve. Also, adding a bit more details to some scenarios would be appreciated.
Overall, it's a good story. Keep up the good work. 👍
First of all, Thank you for people who wants read my novel Second, I hope everyone support me Third, I deeply sorry for a mistake I make here and there in the Novel Last, Please enjoy if you like my Novel I will keep improving my self to be a better at writing
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Reveal Spoiler
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
It seems to be a good story. Although wish you would have some more chapters in it. Why does this thing need 140 letters. You would think any review would be taken but no you need 140 letters.
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A fun read. Great to pass time. Grammar needs to improve. Also, adding a bit more details to some scenarios would be appreciated. Overall, it's a good story. Keep up the good work. 👍