Superior Intellect

Superior Intellect

Fantasy22 Chapters74.0K Views
Author: Mad_Mace
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Have you ever known that something bad was going to happen before it did? Have you ever wished you could? Well Michael actually can and, with the help of his Superior Intellect, magic and hardwork, he's on the warpath. Nobody, not even a dragon, can get away with taking away his happy ending!



*New and revised chapters now appearing on Moonquill.com (no system in revised story)*

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MacGillavry
MacGillavry

Yeah, not bad. I’d say you’re going a bit fast (though I’m guilty of the same thing, I must admit) with giving the character a reason to fight, some characters are kind of one-dimensional, and the system with IP thing is a bit jarring compared to the fantasy styled-world, but you have several strong points. The physical descriptions are fairly good, always something I look for in a good novel. The introduction of the magic system was also done well, through use of teaching, if not still a little fast. Overall, I would advise planning out the storyline and trying not to follow plot points that have become cliches over these past couple years. I have high hopes for you!

5 years ago
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Mad_Mace
Mad_Mace

Hello there, wonderful readers! Shameless author here. I plan to release a minimum of one chapter/day and may release more. For every 20 power stones, I'll release an extra chapter, so make sure to vote if you like the story! Your comments matter and I'd love nothing more than for you to make your voices heard. That's all for now! ENJOY!!

5 years ago
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_Kaitlin_
_Kaitlin_

I just finished reading all the chapters so far. I! LOVED! It! The details and concepts implemented were amazing. But, gee! I hope this updates soon and continues. It’s too good to be another dropped book...

5 years ago
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