Stranded from the past. Is this heaven’s wish for us?
I was afraid to wish for more wishes, heaven granted us more time when I was slipping away from you back then when you rescued me from the battle field, I'm not afraid of the pain, but I can't tolerate the torment to have you go through the hurt again. We asked for a chance to live the next life differently for us to show our love to all. They listened again as cupid strike and the world witness our story that we made. But as how we have been told, each episode that we live through the century came with a price.
We were lost moving on until the day stopped again, the eyes in-front froze as I looked up, a familiar figure which stood staring back on this same slope where we once cherished so much.
And as two figures stood there frozen in time... the only movement was that of the snowflakes that falls through in between us that were once showering us with their blessings but now here, it melted like tears from heaven as the two souls stared at each other....
The vision of happy memories where the whisper of "I want to spend every winter here with you" stabs the heart even more as both tried to stay composed under the cold winter sky, stranded from the past.
The nightmare of never wanting to bump into the past came crashing.... are we being fooled again? Is it heaven's wish for us so that we will live on or is there more to it....
C 1: The past & the present
C 2:Dreams that haunt our misses
C 3: Seal my heart please & protect him
C 4: The snowflakes that binds us
C 5: The wind tells me you are near
C 6: Stay this way
C 7: When souls unite
C 8: From the depth of my heart
C 9: The morning after
C 10: The knotted fate at the start
C11:The lighted path called home
C12:When it becomes unbearable
C13:The first séparation from the past
C 14:The morning coffee filled with love
C 15:Let us be bonded from now on
C16:True Love that can’t be concealed
C17:Through the centuries I still love you
C18:Will you stand with me again
C19: 258 - Hear My Heart
C20: Our Dream Place that opens to the sky above
C21: As one we live - need you by my side always
C22: Beyond the deal - Our future that sparks from a dream
C23: Author’s Closing Note: Dream with Passion, Live with Purpose, Act with Wisdom
Updated 1 Sept 2020
I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!
It's a serene, beautiful yet captivating story about love...the author makes the boys' struggle against fate across different lifetimes feel real even though it is a very out-worldly concept... Great and relatable characters...beautifully sculpted. The first few chapters are a little confusing on what is going on, probably because of the long paragraphs. Story's a hidden gem...waiting to be read.
Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading
wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up
I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.
A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.
Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople
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Interesting characters with equally intriguing backstories. Would love to learn more about them as time passes by! Beautifully written to convey emotions, and I see a lot of potential in this work!
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Deatiled description... check! A spiral of emotions... check! myriad of events... check! lovable and relatable characters... check! This work is really great! Kudos to the author!
Hello north, I would have preferred you separate paragraphs more because it appears kinda bulky when you read it in the app. The story hits right through my kokoro as always and sometimes I am intrigued about your views about love and life. I would have liked to talk more with you in discord but I am under MGS currently. The way you write is full of longing and nostalgia and it made me wanna find my soulmate. Wherever he is in this life, I hope God destroys all his fake relationships so that he could meet me faster. 😭😭
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