Unraveling Despair
On indefinite hiatus.
Reason - Focusing on studying.
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“Impossible is a word to be found only in the dictionary of fools."
Whoever said this, I wanted to ask them.
What if we were against a sinister god-like being?
A sane choice would be being the fool.
When it gave me an unimaginable power of time, but it turned out to be a curse.
I tried to find the meaning behind the nightmare but got involved in something even worse.
Thus, with no choice left—even when I knew I had a tough road ahead—I used my power to try to make everything right and make the impossible, possible.
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Warning- Depiction of blood and death
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First time reviewing very new work and review is based on first chapter itself. First of all writing quality is top notch. Characters I can't say for sure as it's only first chapter but hope they'll be impactful. World is also described beautifully not many details just enough for adding spice to story. Story started calmly and suddenly went from 0 to 100 which quite hooked me, I hope stable updates will be released for the story as it'll be waste of such impactful start.
Pretty good so far. To be honest I would give this a perfect score if I were comparing it only to other Webnovels however I think it has the potential to stand as an actual book, and it that regard there are definite criticisms. That being said, this is only the beginning and the author is definitely improving so who knows what the future holds.
There's not much to say since there are only like 3 chaps, but it's really good. Especially the grammar and the chapter structuring. It's really easy on the eye. Keep up the good work.
Suspense, thrilling, interesting and intriguing, chapter one held my heart high, it was like reality, I felt every emotion and commotion, keep it up writer, more chapters please
the book felt so real, i was really hooked on it, i am waiting for the next chapter to see how things unfold you are doing good author, thanks for giving me inspiration :D
The writing quality is godly. Just one chapter and it managed to put me on the edge. I can't wait to experience the world in the story.......
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Okay, I hope that you don't mind me being honest. This is written well I can say, especially since it's in first person which is more impressive, but even if I enjoyed your way of writing and the feel of the story, I can't really give it a full review though. So sorry about that, but I'll keep on reading this book and wait for more chapters to come, if there are more chapters I'll change my review.
The grammar is great, im liking the plot so far and the synopsis is epic. Looking forward to reading more!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Your word choice is really good, and I was shivering (reading this while in online class lol). I can't wait for another chapter. Good job! I love your story, 5 stars for you XD
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This is intense. The descriptive aspect imprisons the senses. You get the first seat as the events unfold before you. Bumpy and exciting ride.
The only problem here is that the author doesn't update 10 chapters a day!!!! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Great Story!