I love it! Both of your story and writing got potential! I believe so, all you have to do is keep writing to improve. I like how you describe the change of a situation, it was unique. Explain more about the character and situation to increase the readers imagination. Great job author, keep writing!!
4 years ago
1
ShadowPrincess96
Wow!
It's such a beautiful story!
It's so damn relatable!
Even I don't like rain because I have glasses, lol! but jokes apart I am really looking forward to your novel.
All the best dear author❤️
4 years ago
1
madskie00017
I totally enjoyed the sensibility and the emotions brought by the story.
I enjoyed the first chapter, it was sensible and I agree about "I do not like rains". Can people stop asking us if we are alright when we cry? Obviously, we are not okay when we cry in rain.
Please keep writing!
5 years ago
1
Lami274
Well. I must say the story has a lot to offer. It's a cute and easy to understand kind of story. You just need to work a little on the world background and punctuation marks. Otherwise good job author! Excited for the next chapter!
5 years ago
1
Nocturnal_Dreamer
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
I love it! Both of your story and writing got potential! I believe so, all you have to do is keep writing to improve. I like how you describe the change of a situation, it was unique. Explain more about the character and situation to increase the readers imagination. Great job author, keep writing!!
Wow! It's such a beautiful story! It's so damn relatable! Even I don't like rain because I have glasses, lol! but jokes apart I am really looking forward to your novel. All the best dear author❤️
I totally enjoyed the sensibility and the emotions brought by the story. I enjoyed the first chapter, it was sensible and I agree about "I do not like rains". Can people stop asking us if we are alright when we cry? Obviously, we are not okay when we cry in rain. Please keep writing!
Well. I must say the story has a lot to offer. It's a cute and easy to understand kind of story. You just need to work a little on the world background and punctuation marks. Otherwise good job author! Excited for the next chapter!
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.