Ascenders: Rising From Zero

I actually enjoyed reading this story a lot. Every minute detail is very well outlined in the story plot. The narration made me feel living the story in real. I was actually imagining the things mentioned in story very vividly. This is really wonderful read and you are really very talented for sure. All the best for Spirity awards. And please upload more chapters soon. I am not liking the cliffhanger for the last chapter..Hhehehe...

Hey, there author! This story is fabulous! Your character names are so unique! Honestly, I don't actually like reading fantasy stories but this definitely got me hooked. I'm waiting for your updates!!

Wooo! Bang! Bong! It's getting exciting already. I really hope to see more sir. And I especially love how you keep each details explained as you go on. Kudos to you and more ink to your pen!

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The story hooked me up so far. The plot and world building is fabulous. Enjoyed reading the story so far because fantasy is one of my favorite genre and author did a very good job.

Writing Quality {[5]} The grammar is great with little to no errors, definitely won't trigger the GPF or the Grammar Police Force. The writing style of the author was impressive. When it comes to punctuation, there are a bit of misuse in commas when it comes to the dialogues. Stability of Updates {[5]} This is always an automatic five for me Story Development {[5]} Well, the pace is smooth. Not that fast, not that slow. I love the character interaction. The author gets to the point, not requiring a whole chunk of text. No purple prose or anything. Character Design {[5]} Well, I got confused in the first chapter since all I know is that the teacher had glasses but in a few more paragraphs, the teacher was described more often so I was able to imagine how the teacher looked like. Still worth five stars since the other characters were described profoundly. World Background {[5]} Unlike detective-fiction, the genre in which this novel belongs to is in need of world-building and world-background. The author managed to surpass my expectations when it comes to this category. I understand the places, the scenes, the scenarios, and can easily picture them in my mind. Will I recommend this? Of course! Definitely worth a try.

Interesting story! The Author has done a great job in the story building and it seems this book is planned out really well!! I can't wait to see the MC's development to be a badasss character lol. Keep on writing, Author!

Though fantasy is one of my favorite genres but this story still came out as a surprise. There are so many names that I'm unfamiliar with but the author has done a great job in explaining them. The mc is not the op and perfect ml from the very start so you can expect to see - weak to strong evolution. Keep up the good work author!!

Let me tell you I screamed when I saw the Yoruba. I was excited when I saw the names so I am really looking forward to this book. Good luck. I just want to say you are doing a good job.

I think this is a really interesting story, like where it's going so far. I think what catches my eye about this story is that Mc isn't really like most Mc's who are usually the all righteous good doer's. Now who knows he may change further down the line of the story, but I think I like that about the story the most, very good read.

Keep it up Author, I can see a story from weak to strong being developed here, added to library, will catch up with the story progress, gambate~

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Wow! I'm blown away by the interesting information shown in this novel! The world building is superb and very detailed! The Author has the unique talent that can transport reader into his make believe universe as awesome as his writing skill! Good job for the hard work Author! A page turner novel! Worth reading! Try it!