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I read the whole book since I had the break too. Very good book,I liked the design and determination you put into your book, and to be honest, the development needed a bit work, because it kind of confuses me.

I would work on the punctuation and grammar. However, you've got a great groove going for the story. Its fun to imagine and read a story of someone going on adventures with an animal friend. I guess its a dream we all had at one point of our life.

The first chapter really gave me the heartache. It was so abusive for me, anyone else have the same happenings as Cora. And this got the drama feels in it, maybe you could all check it out!

I love this story, it's very creative and the characters are perfect with their strengths and flaws. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling could be better, but over all the writing itself has a nice vocabulary level and the plot and story line makes the story interesting to read. The characters themselves have their own personalities and are pretty well written. The background of the different world is also pretty well-organized.