This story needs to be spaced out so it can last longer. It has a good foundation that can be built into an empire if conducted right. I love the character structure. I like the details. But there could be more! Don't stop writing, keep going. Only practice makes perfect!!! Good job Wes!
This story needs to be spaced out so it can last longer. It has a good foundation that can be built into an empire if conducted right. I love the character structure. I like the details. But there could be more! Don't stop writing, keep going. Only practice makes perfect!!! Good job Wes!