Pixie woke up in a hospital. People say she was in a coma. But she knew better doesn't she?. She was a warrior in a kingdom in another dimension,wasn't she? She was a fighter? She had the life she wanted, what she hoped for ever since she was a child....and she got it.hadnt she? But her memories are fading and now the time did in fact, feel like a dream, she is confused. But would a dream seem so real? Would she know knives and guns like she knew her own name? And who was that Dashiell she keeps mumbling about?
Eh. Fix some capatilization, spacing and put less "..." in each sentence. It's a decent book, might be worth a read in the future. If I had to say anything read it aloud while carefully tracing the words to see if you like how it flows and if everything is up to par.