While trying to ensure the safety of his parents who were well-prepared believers in the doomsday and his clueless childhood friend in a world that is changing very quickly Arbus prepares for a trip of a lifetime through an apocalyptic world that has quickly started to fall apart.
An extremely fun synopsis and premise for a story. Dialogue, grammar, and syntax is excellent. Likeable characters, with a story that immediately hooks you in. Please keep writing.
The story is complex enough to make you hooked and mystified by it. I can sense that this work was well thought out and I am happy to say that it has quality. The story also progresses nicely that I am thrilled to read chap to chap. Kudos for a job well done!
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your story is so good. your grip on your plot is really marvellous. your every dialogue is unique or real. in short, totally different style.
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