World Of Heroes: System of the Firstborn
Jax'in Gail'Toren is the the last known surviving Moon Elf on the world Wysterian. After an ambush by the tyrannical King Halcion's Hunters, known as Hounders, he travels alone, unless you count the semi-sentient 'System' that guides him. However, he finds out that he isn't the only one who can use the 'System'. There are 4 others that can use the 'System' and one is his friend (and possible lover????) the Princess of the Halcion Kingdom, Zarita Camilla Halcion!! He must get to safety and travel through a desert wasteland, a forest that tries to devour any who desire passage, and a land of ebony stone and liquid fire to find the other 3 users of the 'System', and will he risk his life to rescue the Halcion Kingdoms FIrst Princess! Well read it and find out how our Heroes story goes!
Hey guys, author here, I hope everyone enjoys my novel and can leave some comments and reviews to help my novel improve. Also of course I'd give myself 5 stars, I like my story lol.
Uh, so did anyone else notice that around chapter 5 it switched to a third person point of view? don't get me wrong, switching to third person makes the novel flow better and Im actually enjoying this book. for one a lot of other authors wouldve just had some random bs happen to make the sword kill the worm when it shattered, where this one actually has the characters be more human, prone to making mistakes, and thinking outside the box in desperate situations.