You need to tell her that you love her, but you only have a few minutes left. It's a battle between love and life, what will you choose?
Will you choose your love for her? Or will you choose your precious life?
Join me as I unveil a somewhat magical story about a man who fell in love with the right girl at a very wrong time.
All I can say is that your sentences needed separation. Maybe a couple of 2 line sentences, but that's opinion. Great work, and I'm interested to see more!
Good job on your content, keep writing and inspire people with your craft. thank you for sharing talent. good luck and stay safe duirng pandemic