Unearthly Beauty

This had been fun! The pacing of the story was great. The characters were funny. I didn't even notice how long the chapters were. The author also gives you the necessary information to keep up with the plot. We haven't seen much with the male lead yet but the female lead was delightful. One thing I have to comment about is the grammatical and punctuation errors. I think you really need to go back and edit. There were some words that were reduntant. For example the use of the word "man" on the first chapter. Your writing was superb! Great storytelling skill! The story was easy read, nothing too heavy as of the moment.

Ok, I love this. I'm a BIG mythology fanatic, so stories like these (even if it's just the chapters with hot stuff) always brighten my day. Really, thank you for writing this. I sincerely hope you continue. This is one of the rare smuts that I actually enjoyed, it's not too raunchy, and the exasperated Vampire King is just plain hilarious. I love the succubus, she's a beaut. Keep it up, write more, and get those followers you deserve!

An enjoyable read that focuses on demonic mythology subverting my initial expectations on the various races that were introduced as being magical (Fey). The characters are very amusing and three dimensional with the pov style not feeling ... cliched? Y'know, the feeling most pov novels give where you just roll your eyes and go "Oh, it switched again. Awesome. Who's this again?". Yeah, this one didn't give me that. Grammar is good, some errors in the dialogues but that actually gives flavor to the characters speaking (native speakers are very informal when talking, ignoring grammar and using slang) so that's a nice touch that's appreciated. The FL, Cerise, speaking French occasionally is also a great touch that increases her personality while making her exotic. There's also something really nice about how mature the characters are. One thing I've faced backlash on with my female characters is how they've had relationships with men before officially getting together with the MC, but it's just realistic. Like here, Cerise, she's been in a relationship before meeting the ML, Deimos, and it's just refreshing to see this: characters acting like real life people and each of them respecting each other despite everything. One thing that I felt could be improved (and this is me nitpicking) are the love scenes. Some of the words are ... too p*rn-ish instead of er*tic. Like, a little improvement by changing words would be nice and make it more sensual (for instance, instead of using pu*sy or c*ck, use words like honeypot, rod, spear, etc or instead of thrust/dig use burrow, tunnel, delve, impale). Other than that, the scenes were well written and, unlike most smut, driven by plot rather than being the plot. This alone gives the novel a high rating but combining that with an intriguing plot serves to make the story all the more enjoyable and interesting.

Beautiful Cerise and Vampire king Deimos.... This seems to be a explosive combination. The story has a unique plot. I was more intrigued by what deathly secret your synopsis is referring to and that made me read this story. I am going to read and cover up all rest of the chapters till you update more. Except very few to none mistakes, your grammar is perfect even though English is not your first language. That's really great. Your vocab is incredible and the control over the writing is very well. Tbh every crucial point in your story made me feel the emotions as well as the intended effect. That is really hard to narrate. You can check few comments I left. I really loved your writing style. And now lastly, SMUT... My my.. I was actually speechless. Without any trace of vulgarity you really made the part maintain its purpose. I am inspired.. Lol. I will be taking this as a reference in my book when needed. Thanks in advance. :) Kudos !

The plot seems to flow really well, and while I needed some getting used to the story, I think it’s a great book for mythology lovers. Only thing if I were nitpick is that there are some grammar and punctuations mistakes I have spotted in the chapters. I have pointed some of them out but not all. Overall, it’s an interesting book ! So keep up the good work author ! ( ^ω^ )

The Synopsis is very attention grabbing - really enjoyed this book. It had a good build up with a satisfying and heartfelt romance between the characters. Definitely worth reading.

I'm really happy you decided to publish this book. It is a very refreshing story, plus the characters are hot. good job on this and good luck.

It is good to make a story such interesting. The overall story, I like it and I think author is going ina correct way to write such a novel. The author is good at creating a direction for reader to understand this novel

It's a good fantasy romance novel. And the synopsis was at******* catching. I can get the story concept from synopsis . And it's good start. Good job. Keep going.