bft 2.3

This is a true novel in the making. One of the deepest and realest world setting, character building here in WN. With a steady pace & good grasp of illustration the author sets near perfect plotline for an exciting historical adventure.! I loved it. A worthy addition to my library. ! Looking forward to more chapters, although I am on the 3rd one .. Hehe

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It is well written with a good storyline. The proofreaders are also doing a great job. Its a good read if your looking for a fantasy novel with a lot of new ideas.

I am not a fan of fantasy stories but I love this so much. The story is very interesting and keeps you yearning for more. Can't wait to read future updates. Thumbs up.

Wow. I love this novel soo much. Character design, writing quality, story development, plot everything is perfect. Great piece. Keep it uup..

Dope. Keep it coming. I hope you will write more chapters. Nicely put and organized. Work on adding pictures or maybe you had them but my phone couldn’t load them.

I have nothing but praise for this work. First of all, I love that introductory chapter. It baited me right off the bat. I love the excellent use of words that just flow out seemingly, giving me a pleasant reading experience, without the grammar pet-peeves. Moreover, it really gives a vivid imagery of what's happening. So 11/10 for that impressive construction. For the characters, I love how they are described. There seems to be an air of mystery surrounding them - Eric and Jayne. I can feel it, this novel will bring us to a new perspective, and these characters will be caught up in a way they didn't think their fates could. I've only read 5 chapters so far, but I'm absolutely positive about this, so I'll rate a perfect score now. I added this to my library. If you're looking for an excellent prose, this one is for you.

It is a well-written and very descriptive novel. I love the plot and the flow of the story. This novel will have your interest from the very start. There are some types and the paragraphs are too long, but other than that, it is an excellent work.

This book is really good, the writing style has brilliantly laid the worlds background and the main character in place. I also like the plot. However, I do find the paragraphs to be too long, it would be good if you can separate them into smaller paragraphs overall I really love the story and highly recommend it. Keep writing author.😁

Nice and very interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Please keep it up dear author. Make sure for regular updates 😉😊

Overall a good book. Some of the paragraphs are a bit too long. It's good that it's long but not too long. I like the hidden humor and it is so descriptive. A good book. A must-read. Your style of writing is sexy👀👀👀👀👀👀🤣 to me. Keep up the good work. Definitely adding it to my library!

This is quite an Interesting book, and I hope to see more of it. Which Is all I had to say but I have a character quota to meet before I post this small review.

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lots of words in one chapter sheesh good Grammer blah blah hfhdjsjsbdjjdbdjsjdbdjsjd jshrndjdhfjshdbfjdhdjfjd here because writer asked me to review lol