Ok lets list the facts here.... I died, just to find out that I shouldn't have died, and now you're giving me a really op sorry gift....... Seems legit, what could possibly go wrong?
Lol princess vegeta? isn't that going a little bit too far? I mean unless you completely change his apppearanc- let me stop I'm being a hypocrite because mystory has Naruko in it.
This is extremely original, I had only seen one other fanfic in history with a female vegeta story, that was a neglected fanfic crossover with Naruto.
I haven't read it yet but your story just by the table of contents alone. makes me interested, People as you know this is a gender gender story Of VEGETA, you don't like it .just warning you now this is not for You.
Can't wait to see where this story leads.
4 years ago
46
The_Wild_Trill
PLEASE GIVE THIS STORY A GOOD REVIEW. I really want to continue this book and the minimum chapter will be chapter 60. Please give me a good review and comment
4 years ago
62
mauricio_lopez
author do not forget to add all the female angels, so hot xD.
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4 years ago
204
Demonzor
Just a basic wish fulfillment story with some gender bent characters nothing special about probably going to end up being dropped before it hits chapter 50
4 years ago
25
Jasonenrick
Wow, just wow.
so basically he can have all the bloodlines and powers of every Anime in the dragonball Universe but he can't have them in the DxD Universe because they don't belong and don't exist there ?
that makes absolutly no Sense?
naruto bloodlines don't exist in the DB Universe as well but he could still use them .
bullshit Nerf Mc
4 years ago
18
mutekishifu
this novel is for you who like canon above all (with a little gender change).
the author follows the philosophy of following the shit of the canon whenever( it is not worth reading)
4 years ago
14
Givmetehmony
It is the first time that I make a negative review of a novel but this novel lost my respect when I changed the gender to Goku and Vegeta, he cannot follow any more of that, seriously, what the **** went through the author's head to think it would be good idea to make that gender change
4 years ago
10
Victor_Weismann
it is a story of wish fulfillment, read-only as a hobby.
It is quite evident that the author is new to writing, because of that, I will not discourage you from writing, this is a good novel for beginners.
Just enjoy a story with OP character, OP system, half-ass protagonist, and some characters with changed genres.
4 years ago
5
mutekishifu
novel 4,5 star
nerf = -1 star
system slave: -2 star (the system tells him to sit and he obeys (the system is in charge, he decides where Mc should be and when)
the harem is so big that character development doesn’t exist (I know this is normal in harem but here it’s elevated to the tenth power) = - 0,5 star
Total star = 1,5
4 years ago
4
Kutucuk
This thing is awesome,that's all I wanna say................................................................................................
4 years ago
4
Hasu_Yodd
The biggest problem I have is why the f*** is he not letting gine meet female kakarot. why is being such a sissy: and for what stability of plot.
if you care about plot then why did you write an alternate universe in which every Main character is female and MC saves his mother and gine when everything is so f***** up why does he care work plot
4 years ago
4
BrownOptometrist
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4 years ago
4
somehuck
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4 years ago
4
Lucifer7030
Really Good Story i hope you can keep it up and don't drop it.
Lol princess vegeta? isn't that going a little bit too far? I mean unless you completely change his apppearanc- let me stop I'm being a hypocrite because mystory has Naruko in it. This is extremely original, I had only seen one other fanfic in history with a female vegeta story, that was a neglected fanfic crossover with Naruto. I haven't read it yet but your story just by the table of contents alone. makes me interested, People as you know this is a gender gender story Of VEGETA, you don't like it .just warning you now this is not for You. Can't wait to see where this story leads.
PLEASE GIVE THIS STORY A GOOD REVIEW. I really want to continue this book and the minimum chapter will be chapter 60. Please give me a good review and comment
author do not forget to add all the female angels, so hot xD. .....................................................................................................................................................................................
Just a basic wish fulfillment story with some gender bent characters nothing special about probably going to end up being dropped before it hits chapter 50
Wow, just wow. so basically he can have all the bloodlines and powers of every Anime in the dragonball Universe but he can't have them in the DxD Universe because they don't belong and don't exist there ? that makes absolutly no Sense? naruto bloodlines don't exist in the DB Universe as well but he could still use them . bullshit Nerf Mc
this novel is for you who like canon above all (with a little gender change). the author follows the philosophy of following the shit of the canon whenever( it is not worth reading)
It is the first time that I make a negative review of a novel but this novel lost my respect when I changed the gender to Goku and Vegeta, he cannot follow any more of that, seriously, what the **** went through the author's head to think it would be good idea to make that gender change
it is a story of wish fulfillment, read-only as a hobby. It is quite evident that the author is new to writing, because of that, I will not discourage you from writing, this is a good novel for beginners. Just enjoy a story with OP character, OP system, half-ass protagonist, and some characters with changed genres.
novel 4,5 star nerf = -1 star system slave: -2 star (the system tells him to sit and he obeys (the system is in charge, he decides where Mc should be and when) the harem is so big that character development doesn’t exist (I know this is normal in harem but here it’s elevated to the tenth power) = - 0,5 star Total star = 1,5
This thing is awesome,that's all I wanna say................................................................................................
The biggest problem I have is why the f*** is he not letting gine meet female kakarot. why is being such a sissy: and for what stability of plot. if you care about plot then why did you write an alternate universe in which every Main character is female and MC saves his mother and gine when everything is so f***** up why does he care work plot
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Really Good Story i hope you can keep it up and don't drop it.
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