First, if you use MTL to translate it please do edit and read it first before you posting it... it's really horrible..
And edit which part is a conversation and which part is a naration, use the damn quotes mark.. -,-"
I dont understand a single bit of your story
5 years ago
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DartLove
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5 years ago
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Weirdo
Yeah... Not understand anything despite it having a good amount of chapter kind of irritates me. I don't know the original language of this, but I hope you can find a better translator perhaps? I rather you just use the original language than translate it into this garbage..
4 years ago
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Frog_King
I don't have a single clue whats going on here
4 years ago
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Ethan_akky
straight away I couldn't get into this as it felt all over the place, couldn't get into actual reading it as just didn't read right for me
First, if you use MTL to translate it please do edit and read it first before you posting it... it's really horrible.. And edit which part is a conversation and which part is a naration, use the damn quotes mark.. -,-" I dont understand a single bit of your story
Reveal Spoiler
Yeah... Not understand anything despite it having a good amount of chapter kind of irritates me. I don't know the original language of this, but I hope you can find a better translator perhaps? I rather you just use the original language than translate it into this garbage..
I don't have a single clue whats going on here
straight away I couldn't get into this as it felt all over the place, couldn't get into actual reading it as just didn't read right for me