Man he is way to overpowered. and what is wilth all that killing because he is irritated. Kind of has no meaning. Man try to read some fanfics and you may come to know to write a better fanfic. A mc must atleast have a little bit of trouble or else it becomes too boring. Everything is handled in the background which makes it even more boring.
Try writing a better one next time.
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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
please can someone tell me the original chinese name of this work so i can find it
please can someone tell me the original chinese name of this work so i can find it
Man he is way to overpowered. and what is wilth all that killing because he is irritated. Kind of has no meaning. Man try to read some fanfics and you may come to know to write a better fanfic. A mc must atleast have a little bit of trouble or else it becomes too boring. Everything is handled in the background which makes it even more boring. Try writing a better one next time.
please can someone tell me the original chinese name of this work so i can find it please can someone tell me the original chinese name of this work so i can find it