The Pentact : Ash
hi,I'm anew authour the synopsis for this story isnt long but before I get into that ,once you've read the story can you just drop you're thoughts on the story in the comment section ,much appreciated
So I'll constantly be updating the synopsis and changing it as I further the story but for know heres what you need to know
We set our eyes upon a boy no old than 6 who after the death of his mother and years earlier the disappearance of his father is taken by a horseman to a certain iceylandscape ,he stays for there for 10 years learning ,because of an unfortunate accident /event he slips into a coma for 1 month when he wakes up hes much different to before but he is still himself ,he finds himself at the precipice of war and death ,how will he survive ,save his friends ,and find out how she feels...
*more coming after a few chapters*
There may not be very much of the story but so far it seems as if its gonna be very interesting and I really hope that ,the author continues to steadily release more and more of the story looking forward to reading it : )
So far it seems to have a lot of potential and I'd like to see how the author continues the book ,he does seem to be using a writing style that makes the story seem ....old ,not in a bad way tho I actually like it
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Uhm not sure what to say it was suprising to say the least,its not bad at all I thought it would alot worse than what it actually was [img=update]