I some how ended up on Fishman Island, in the One Piece world after getting lost in the mountains.

I plan to leave the Strawhats alone and live a normal life while enjoying the wonders of the new world I find myself in, but everyone has to make a living in any world so I'll...

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Transporter : Fishman Island

ROMANCE

ADVENTURE

REINCARNATION

SLICEOFLIFE

NONHUMAN

its a good FF. but its not for me.
why?

-MC joins luffy

-The best thing about this book was the fact that MC started way way before cannon, but the author time skips cause MC got caught and lived the life a slave. And during this time MC grew strong I guess, but thats what sucks, over 8 yrs + just wasted on a time skip so that MC joins cannon time and meets luffy and joins him. Would've been better to read about world exploration and experiences or something.

-Another that was cool was the setting [ Fishman island ]. it would've been nice to see a more described and explored one rather than a some chps just to make MC ' related ' to em cause once again it isnt explored. just glossed over

-Plus they just join. I mean luffy asked to join, MC said yes. I get anime relationships jumpstart but even in OP the author had arcs for each of the main cast where the characters grew closer. each personal arc and another subsidiary arcs to further unite em. like alabasta and skypiea/ Water 7 and thiller bark/ TB and sabody arc. here its not there.

join my crew.sure. thats all. I trust you luffy

-As of current reading either MC is weak [ like strawhats before time skip lvl ] or he is OP [ yonko commander + ]. and both just dont work. dosnt work if he is strong since he joined someone weaker, dosnt work if he is weak cause despite being a slave he fought for 10 yrs or so.

-MC names himself D. The D isnt just a name, its a generational family thing. You are named . Plus if u name ur self for shits and giggles u are kinda screwing ur self over cause unless u have a backing the WG will try to fk with you, and every D so far had that or were hidden [ like law did, he hid the D...[ 😊 ] or like teach did- White beard].

so yah. overall its interesting but the lack of world exploration and CD and the D thing kinda made be lose interest. but despite that I still have it my library and am still reading, so it does tell u alot about the bk

**: if the author reads this, ur other works were dope, if u can,, ,continue em

I liked it hope it continues..................................
I liked it hope it continues..................................
I liked it hope it continues..................................


Pretty interesting premise and I like it. Give it a try.                                                                                       

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if you can please continue, Blue Devil Story. 



















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Interesting. The story is a bit fast. Hope you give some time and build the character so the story will be more immersive. And hopefully it will continues!!!! 


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Pretty interesting premise and I like it. Give it a try.

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Pretty interesting premise and I like it. Give it a try.

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Amazing fanfic. I began reading out of curiosity, and I don’t regret it. the character is interesting and the development is really good too. I hope he go back to Fishman Island soon

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