Horrible writing. It's like a five year old writing a story. The author has no skill to write at all. And the grammer is very bad not readable at all. And very random in the plot of the story, which gives a very illogical and confusing story development.
4 years ago
8
Frank_The_Fuctard
this book remind me of something I'd find on wattpad. shit writing, crappy plot, I hope the author well on his journey to becoming a better writer but this.......this is trash๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
4 years ago
7
TheMedallion
world view is too small
i can not think future or story's expectation is all ways wait and see but i do not like that i feel claustrophobic.
4 years ago
4
Mark_White_2085
Grammer needs work
but I like๐๐[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] the story so๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
this is an oki story if yu like a poor story written w lousy grammar that's all over the place i payed 2 fast passes just 2 read some more of the same take my advice if yu start to read this stick with the 57 free chapters then dump it not worth any fast passes at all i def wont continue 2 read it now that they charge for it
4 years ago
0
SoulCube
Jesus this is bad, the grammar and bad writing from the author make it downright unreadable. It's about the writing quality is something off Wattpad or an eight-year-olds dream journal.
Horrible writing. It's like a five year old writing a story. The author has no skill to write at all. And the grammer is very bad not readable at all. And very random in the plot of the story, which gives a very illogical and confusing story development.
this book remind me of something I'd find on wattpad. shit writing, crappy plot, I hope the author well on his journey to becoming a better writer but this.......this is trash๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
world view is too small i can not think future or story's expectation is all ways wait and see but i do not like that i feel claustrophobic.
Grammer needs work but I like๐๐[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] the story so๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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this is an oki story if yu like a poor story written w lousy grammar that's all over the place i payed 2 fast passes just 2 read some more of the same take my advice if yu start to read this stick with the 57 free chapters then dump it not worth any fast passes at all i def wont continue 2 read it now that they charge for it
Jesus this is bad, the grammar and bad writing from the author make it downright unreadable. It's about the writing quality is something off Wattpad or an eight-year-olds dream journal.
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