Twilight:Rise of The Unchained

I like the idea and would like to see more.

Main character is a moron. The writing quality is unimpressive, the author doesn't seem to be aware of the miraculous invention called "punctuation".

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haven't even read it but since it's about the unchained instant 5 star p.s don't drop......................................................

i love this and it's only been 2 chapter which is awesome, keep it up man because you're epic! I really like the hanma in twilight concept, not enough powerful human fanfics out there.

Please come back and continue writing, PLEASE!!! There are no good Baki or Yujiro thpes of books on this sit…. please come back and finish it with a nice and long story line

It does not get any better than this book. I can read this forever trurl a dissapoint ment that this book was delayed can't wait for more chapter. This is a must keep in your library forever and ever.

Really good Just wished you Hadn’t dropped 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Please don‘t drop this please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease🤩

Love the Baki concept👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍please don’t drop👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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