The Porter is Secretly an SS-Level Hunter
Disclaimer: MC is bisexual! Book One Finish!
Warning: Arc One is terribly written; Arc Two is where the plot gets better.
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"I'm bored."
Neban Zaal, an SS-level hunter, was tired of being one. And even though he does not mind working all the time, he did not like fame nor being in the spotlight; plus, he never wanted to be a hunter in the first place.
He only became a hunter to provide for his son when he unexpectedly became a single father. But, after three years of being a hunter and making more than enough money to provide for his child for a lifetime, he is ready to quit.
So, he did what he finally wanted to since day one; he disappeared from the life of being a hunter.
But, he was always the type that had to work, or he would become too bored. He decided to do the next best thing to give him more freedom, but enough to make him feel like he is working: he became a porter.
Follow Neban in his adventure at keeping his SS-level a secret as he works as a porter while trying to stick to the shadows.
Remember, secrets always find a way into the light.
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* Cover art commissioned from ukhyukhy
I'm really into your writing style. It's calm and clear, which makes the story much more understandable than stories that simply rush into action. It's very clear you've thought the storyline through. Also I'm a fan of Theo, he sounds totally adorable. 🤭 My genre is romance, and I think that's what makes me like your writing more. You said on the Forum romance isn't your thing, but you do have a 'romantic' way of describing things sometimes. I like that, you paint a great picture of the world your characters live in.
Author, here! If you have any questions about the story, ask here. My discord is https://discord.gg//4QhEQgpWxu Disclaimer: The beginning is rough with story plot problems, I apologize, I am trying to improve. MC will be dating a female and male, if that is not your taste, please drop my story with no hate. Relationship is PG. Only profanity and fighting is R18.
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I am currently reading at chapter 37. So far so good. The world building are clear, each character have their own unique personality ( Theo are the best character so far, I highly enjoying any chapters with him on it ) and I like how the author already planned how many chapters there is. So, here is solid 5* from me
its alright, i guess. i read up to chapter 10 before i stopped. interactions between father and son are very unnatural and feels super robotic, and it feels like the bisexual stuff is done more for the sake of it than for actual character development. MC is inconsistent in some places, acting and behaving out of character for a "lone wolf" type. also, it felt like a poor writing choice to have the very first job be irregular. inconsistencies with registering to become a porter like how the guy who signed him asked for no ID at all. i guess if you want a novel with a gay mc, this is a choice. otherwise? just read SS rank suicide hunter or stay at home dad in another world, both of which fill their niche better than this one thats straddling both.
As an avid fan of dungeons and SS heroes, I enjoyed the fact the man is cold to everyone but his son. The child is like the breath of fresh air that makes this story different from other OP hero novels. And while the goal of the MC is unclear, I definitely wouldn’t mind reading more of this in my free time. You have a great potential, Author ! So keep it up !
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The novel is nice but, for some reason I'm somewhat disturbed by the mc being bisexual. World backround is a but copied but, nonetheless pretty good. Writing quality goes skyrocket when this author writes it. Loved the characters (Especially Theo) Loved the novel. Overall, pretty good.
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! 💪💪
So few novels ever appreciate the boy child. Most authors write the MC having a daughter because girls are more likely to gain the readers's favors, so good work.
I really like the concept of the story. The novel is interesting and intriguing with the character portrayal which is well designed with interlinking relationships making it humorous and creative. Characters are sketched out finely tallying to the requirement of the plot. I like reading from every genre and particularly fond of romance not overly excessive but a little bit is okay, your story even though didn't have those but still is very much likeable. Some typos popping here and there needs to be kept on check.
Really good. I just started it and it's really engaging and fleshed out well! I have two complaints, 1 the occasional grammar/spelling error which is totally fine and easy to ignore, and the fact that the ranking goes SS-S-A-M-D-F. Why is there an M??? LOL, but I really enjoy the story, would highly recommend.
Read a couple chapters before realising the mc is bisexual so i stop reading it, but it seemed pretty good it just wasn't made for me. Check it out if thats your thing
overall nice read :) story is going really smoothly (as far as i read), and although it's relatively calm pace i enjoy reading it. maybe not to the point of binge reading (as it's setting its own pace) it in one go, but definitely reading it whenever you feel like it and want to relax :)
Can't believe I found this one! It's so damn good. Really, OP hero, cold character... Dungeons, hunters. The story plot reminds me a lot with Solo Leveling, but I don't bother since this has its own intriguing plot. Like how the author has done so far, will be a keep for reading in my spare time! Thank you!