Quality is good but still has misspelling and grammar mistakes.
Update is nothing special but still is.
World background is the same.
Story is fuuuukknnnngg boring as hell! 12 chapters of nothing! Training and training and still he’s weak! No action except one 5 sentences mission. Author thinks that adding BS about mc green jumpsuit is fun and better to concentrate on then to actually progress the story.
I don’t know what to say about Mc. Is he an idiot? Probably. Does he think in superhero way? Not really. Does he make any impact in the story? Hell no! He’s useless in the story!
Overall would not recommend, you will just lose time.
4 years ago
9
OrdealOfMc
ah, I love this story. It's also on my list in ffn.net site/app.
I love the writing style, the story progression and the slow(relatively) strenght progression. I love the geek talk with all the medical terms and random bits of information scattered. I love the dynamics between MC and other characters. And I especially love the weekly scheduled updates.
4 years ago
9
welsh123
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4 years ago
9
eccentricbeing18
i don't know if everyone agrees with this but psychopathic tendencies are starting to get boring.
And it's really hard to believe that he can upgrade his way of thinking if everything written is rudimentary. His lack of creativity with cell compatibility and lack of curiousity with natural energy mutations is also a factor.
Anyway, the more the story progress, the more it begins to sound like a thesis. Almost no plot just data and failing dark humor.
Naruto is entertaining because of the sense of adventure and mystery. This novel lacks them though so I think chapter 27 is my stop.
4 years ago
5
fellow_daoist_
I am sure I have read this novel in fanfiction.net ...........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4 years ago
4
Professor_Light
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
2 years ago
2
DaoistZextQE
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
4 years ago
2
lordmattyd
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4 years ago
2
ValZodIsMyName
I like it. It Has some Repetitive moments but other than that, all good. The interludes are enjoyable For most of the time but thats more or less it.
4 years ago
2
allty
I like this type of thorough story telling with pov changes and my favorite naruto character is Guy so this novel is pretty amazing to me. If I have to complain about something is that everything the mc does works or have little to no consequences in case of failure, that and the fact that he doesn't use the 8 gates.
4 years ago
1
XzDanielzX
O protagonista e muito sentimental não curto isso, e não vem uma novel e mais relato não tem imersão nenhuma, protagonista não tem personalidade própria, não tem identidade resumindo e um figurante
a year ago
0
DrearyEyedSlumber
I really loved the story. For those of you who like it when the mc focuses more on improving his bloodline and anything involving that, then you'll love this in my opinion. Sadly the author dropped it if I remember correctly at like chapter 80 because they lost motivation.
2 years ago
0
Lokey_loki
I get that it's not fast paced but this is just to slow and character is like a workaholics mc only explanation for this "bird cage" & now where is Danzo don't tell me, Danzo can't even acknowledge Mc, in the root does he even exist? Talent is good enough to pick Danzo interest, overall it's solid .
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Quality is good but still has misspelling and grammar mistakes. Update is nothing special but still is. World background is the same. Story is fuuuukknnnngg boring as hell! 12 chapters of nothing! Training and training and still he’s weak! No action except one 5 sentences mission. Author thinks that adding BS about mc green jumpsuit is fun and better to concentrate on then to actually progress the story. I don’t know what to say about Mc. Is he an idiot? Probably. Does he think in superhero way? Not really. Does he make any impact in the story? Hell no! He’s useless in the story! Overall would not recommend, you will just lose time.
ah, I love this story. It's also on my list in ffn.net site/app. I love the writing style, the story progression and the slow(relatively) strenght progression. I love the geek talk with all the medical terms and random bits of information scattered. I love the dynamics between MC and other characters. And I especially love the weekly scheduled updates.
Reveal Spoiler
i don't know if everyone agrees with this but psychopathic tendencies are starting to get boring. And it's really hard to believe that he can upgrade his way of thinking if everything written is rudimentary. His lack of creativity with cell compatibility and lack of curiousity with natural energy mutations is also a factor. Anyway, the more the story progress, the more it begins to sound like a thesis. Almost no plot just data and failing dark humor. Naruto is entertaining because of the sense of adventure and mystery. This novel lacks them though so I think chapter 27 is my stop.
I am sure I have read this novel in fanfiction.net ...........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits. f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits. f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits. f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits. f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits. f u c k you and your annoying jumpsuits.
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I like it. It Has some Repetitive moments but other than that, all good. The interludes are enjoyable For most of the time but thats more or less it.
I like this type of thorough story telling with pov changes and my favorite naruto character is Guy so this novel is pretty amazing to me. If I have to complain about something is that everything the mc does works or have little to no consequences in case of failure, that and the fact that he doesn't use the 8 gates.
O protagonista e muito sentimental não curto isso, e não vem uma novel e mais relato não tem imersão nenhuma, protagonista não tem personalidade própria, não tem identidade resumindo e um figurante
I really loved the story. For those of you who like it when the mc focuses more on improving his bloodline and anything involving that, then you'll love this in my opinion. Sadly the author dropped it if I remember correctly at like chapter 80 because they lost motivation.
I get that it's not fast paced but this is just to slow and character is like a workaholics mc only explanation for this "bird cage" & now where is Danzo don't tell me, Danzo can't even acknowledge Mc, in the root does he even exist? Talent is good enough to pick Danzo interest, overall it's solid .
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