Highschool DxD : Actually Satan

I'm liking the story so far no complaints i do hope their is a harem sense he is in a harem world also he has a chat group if he's gonna be Satan he should have a Harem to show his status it is normal to have one in the supernatural world

Okay So I'm finally going to Review my fic after a month... For Starters is it a harem ? yeas so what's the controversy about ? Initially it didn't have any tags as romance was still being decided but now there is clear 2 love interests... It has a rough start i made some mistake in the starting .

Do my eyes deceive me are there's a DxD tag but not a harem tag and your writing it author? TAKE MY STONES

Why would you not have a harem when you are writing about a harem anime. [img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Your writings good. But i think your ideas for this story strayed in a direction that comes off as choatic. Everything your wrote was really cool. But it also pushed the story forward in a way that felt alot like wuxia. where when u look back u ask your self how the fuk did we get here again were we supposed to be doing somethin else.

Hey, Author.......why the hell are you rushing so much. Everything feels so clustered that it's hard to read and digest them. In one chapter the MC is Kinda dumb normal human and in next he is mind fucking the gods.....and how? No explanation what's over. Although the writing style aims for a mature and professional style, skipping the basics just ruins the story......I know you have your own vision, you want to develop the story the way you want it to be, and you should do it......But Please slow down a bit and explain things clearly.....like what kind of power is that, what kind of language is that.....and why the fuck without a reason he can fly in the sky and is unrecognisable in a sketchy clothes. criptic language doesn't always help, sometimes a simplified explanation will elevate the story more......your story lacks vividness to let the readers imagine the scenes you are painting with words.....it's hard to make the picture of something you don't have clarity of. I hope you read this and may this be helpful.

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Good writing, but I can't help but feel this story does not have hands and feet. Pacing and consistency is horrible, one moment MC can be just trying to improve his body but the next moment he can be provoking and threatening all the pantheons, one moment he can be on a mission but the next moment he can be creating a world and deciding to experience billions of years, its like Author has these ideas popping off in his mind and he does not hesitate to write them instantly without refinement and putting much thought, just going on fully into the game with no breaks. Btw 5 stars for creativity for this story but one star for how you portray it.

I'll be honest, I'm not that great at writing an actual constructive review, so this is mainly my personal opinion. I wasn't expecting much from this fic at first since this app is saturated with a lot of brain rotting translations, but this was actually an interesting and engaging read. The writing quality is definitely league above the CN translated fics on DxD, Fate, or Isekais, I've read. The story follows well enough that it kept me immersed and engaged as I binge read the available chapters (14 chapters so far according to the app). I have no comment on the update rate as I just binged all the available chapters right now. The world background is your typical DxD isekai with a chat group, which ironically enough is a plus for me since I want to see how authors would handle the clashing personalities of characters and how well they can portray the chosen members of their not entirely OC. For now I find that this fic has potential and will probably be in my to read lists whenever the other fics I'm reading aren't updated.

The story has a lot of potential, but the pacing feels off. The balance just isn’t there yet. Everything feels a bit too chaotic, and the mission is way too difficult for the characters at this point. I’m all for challenges, but it feels like the stakes are too high too soon, without enough buildup or character development. The MC should have developed slowly with satan seed, but instead, he exploded with power and became OP in one chapter. It’s hard to get invested when things move this quickly. Of course, if it was me, I would have destroyed the whole universe and rebuilt it in my image from the start.

Reminds me of the good old Annihilation maker ff, ITS gotta BE a banger, there are actually Male members in the Chat group which IS nice, thank god its not Just a glorified harem but an actually interesting Gang of Misfits ready to cause some Multiversal mayham.

They killed Magnus and Hikaru. Will they go after the butt-plug guy next? A great book compared to most other fan-fiction. I liked the depiction of Ophis. The story development is interesting and is compensating for it's lacking aspects. The story doesn't follow the dxd plot line. In fact, the plot has gone off the rails from the first arc. MC isn't a horndog trying to get in the pants of every named woman. He can't magically solve their trauma and make them fall in love with him. I can't think of any adjective to describe him besides unremarkable. He's just another random dude without his powers. At least he didn't trade his intelligence stat for p*nis size. Like most harem stories, the women have no pride and are fine with their man sleeping with others. Pathetic weaklings. The story is in danger of becoming another wish fulfillment trash but I think the author can do better. It needs danger and conflict. Without them it's hard to develop characters.

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Look in one word this fic is "epic", it’s was good in so many level, I ain’t going to try to explain why bcs that burdensome, so just try it, you won’t regret it