Highschool DxD : Actually Satan

I'm liking the story so far no complaints i do hope their is a harem sense he is in a harem world also he has a chat group if he's gonna be Satan he should have a Harem to show his status it is normal to have one in the supernatural world

Okay So I'm finally going to Review my fic after a month... For Starters is it a harem ? yeas so what's the controversy about ? Initially it didn't have any tags as romance was still being decided but now there is clear 2 love interests... It has a rough start i made some mistake in the starting .

Do my eyes deceive me are there's a DxD tag but not a harem tag and your writing it author? TAKE MY STONES

Why would you not have a harem when you are writing about a harem anime. [img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

so far one of THE greatest chat group ff i have read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Your writings good. But i think your ideas for this story strayed in a direction that comes off as choatic. Everything your wrote was really cool. But it also pushed the story forward in a way that felt alot like wuxia. where when u look back u ask your self how the fuk did we get here again were we supposed to be doing somethin else.

I'll be honest, I'm not that great at writing an actual constructive review, so this is mainly my personal opinion. I wasn't expecting much from this fic at first since this app is saturated with a lot of brain rotting translations, but this was actually an interesting and engaging read. The writing quality is definitely league above the CN translated fics on DxD, Fate, or Isekais, I've read. The story follows well enough that it kept me immersed and engaged as I binge read the available chapters (14 chapters so far according to the app). I have no comment on the update rate as I just binged all the available chapters right now. The world background is your typical DxD isekai with a chat group, which ironically enough is a plus for me since I want to see how authors would handle the clashing personalities of characters and how well they can portray the chosen members of their not entirely OC. For now I find that this fic has potential and will probably be in my to read lists whenever the other fics I'm reading aren't updated.

Hey, Author.......why the hell are you rushing so much. Everything feels so clustered that it's hard to read and digest them. In one chapter the MC is Kinda dumb normal human and in next he is mind fucking the gods.....and how? No explanation what's over. Although the writing style aims for a mature and professional style, skipping the basics just ruins the story......I know you have your own vision, you want to develop the story the way you want it to be, and you should do it......But Please slow down a bit and explain things clearly.....like what kind of power is that, what kind of language is that.....and why the fuck without a reason he can fly in the sky and is unrecognisable in a sketchy clothes. criptic language doesn't always help, sometimes a simplified explanation will elevate the story more......your story lacks vividness to let the readers imagine the scenes you are painting with words.....it's hard to make the picture of something you don't have clarity of. I hope you read this and may this be helpful.

Reminds me of the good old Annihilation maker ff, ITS gotta BE a banger, there are actually Male members in the Chat group which IS nice, thank god its not Just a glorified harem but an actually interesting Gang of Misfits ready to cause some Multiversal mayham.

The story has a lot of potential, but the pacing feels off. The balance just isn’t there yet. Everything feels a bit too chaotic, and the mission is way too difficult for the characters at this point. I’m all for challenges, but it feels like the stakes are too high too soon, without enough buildup or character development. The MC should have developed slowly with satan seed, but instead, he exploded with power and became OP in one chapter. It’s hard to get invested when things move this quickly. Of course, if it was me, I would have destroyed the whole universe and rebuilt it in my image from the start.

Look in one word this fic is "epic", it’s was good in so many level, I ain’t going to try to explain why bcs that burdensome, so just try it, you won’t regret it

That should cancel out the other one, so it should be 4 stars now. I have no clue if that will work, though. I did not delete the other because I still do think that.

Gonna be honest, this is one of the best DxD fics I've read. You have my stones and keep up the good work your writing is quality.