Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Author-san please do not get discouraged by having less readers than $mut and Hrem FanFics have. This FanFic has potential to be great IMO and as long as you don't drop it then Imma throw stones everyday just for updates. Thanks you and do continue Author-sama.

Main charcter loses and eye and a leg whole being expormentedd on and the first thing she does is go to earth, move in with a random human, and start making deals with criminals. Not very smart and annoying that shes crippled. She should have gone straight to the sun and absorbed enery for at least a year before going to earth

Very good start I must say, but then the story goes downhill. There is a continuing need on the part of the author to write a character with ongoing weaknesses (trauma, loss of limbs and organs, can't control himself emotionally) there is no need for your character to be all powerful but get to the point of lowering him/her that much and then feeling the need for approval of his actions from kal He is a bit ridiculous. You have memories of his past life right? and now he has the experiences of his new life... I honestly don't understand. A solid 3 star

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OOOH SUPERGIRL. My favourite DC heroine, I really like stories with her but they are rare. please don't drop this.

Wish Incould rate this higher than a 3 the writing quality and upload is good but Kara's over reliance in Tech and constant fear are major problems to the enjoyment if the fic sure Kryptonian tech is cool and Kara is still recovering from the start but with how much she telies in tech this is less if a Supergirl fic and more like a Ironman fic it doesn't feel like I'm readijg about Kara Zor El just a female Ironman the PTSD and constant procrastination don't help hope that changes sooner than later because this is otherwise a great fic just has it's glaring issues

As long as you don't bring in males into the lewd situation, I'm totally fine. Not saying guys are bad, but yuri all the way. I mean like come on, a male turned girl, what's the point of going for guys? I hope you take this to heart, I don't care what anyone says.

I really want to love this story. I really do, but I just can’t overlook all the decisions made by the characters in the story to move the plot forward, it makes it look really forced. Character development is well done, but the decision to keep a kryptonian mc rely on prostetics for such a big chunk of the story is too much even though a long enough sun bath (or even a blue sun bath) should be enough to regen to top strength.

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Very well written story that honestly too good for the usual quality posted on this site. I would definitely recommend this to anyone looking to read. It’s also great that it’s not just another young justice canon with an added OC. This story actually has its own plot.

Fantastic read for anyone who enjoys a darker young justice DC journey could not recommend this enough. The author is amazing, every new chapter I shout YES!! With a fist pump. 1) Kara is awsome 2) kori is awsome plus I’m hoping for a lil action 😉 3) it’s not overly op well she is kriptonian but she actually thinks unlike most mc and is empathetic unlike most mcs 4) its young justice So add it and enjoy

I don't understand the meaning of her existence! What does gg want in general? As I understand it, she could regenerate all her parts from the sun! Why did the author put it too late? He didn't make her strong, it's very bad, what did the author do experiments for her? if he didn 't give her any other genes ? ! In short, the brain is very bad, If superman is 35 years old, she would not be able to go unnoticed when she arrived on the planet, The author squeaks well , but I did not like the plot itself!