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Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .

I would say an excellent book to read in your pastime ! Not only is the succubus, our mc, is cautious and smart with her moves but also making me fall in love with her character more. The way the author writes could be lengthy, but that along with some grammatical errors, which came with it, didn’t bother me much. Just makes it more unique. All in all, I enjoyed reading this ! Keep up the good work, Author !

The story is interesting and introduces the characters pretty well. I like the snall interaction between the unknown man and the succubus, and how the plot unfolds from there. I wish you the best on your book author 👍

Okay! where to begin from... What I most like about your work is how impressive the plot has been constructed with well thought out concept pertaining to mysteries and humour. I like the characters and feel lot more intriguing events to follow by soon. Good job author, it's already in my collection. 😊

This is actually a nice piece. The world you have build is well described with much thought put into the characters. The pace of the story is good and it appeals to me. I would say to pay a bit of attention to commas, but other than that this is good and going to my collection. Nice work, author!

Really interesting story beginning! Your prose flows nicely and your mastery of the language is clear. Great job of editing! Your descriptions are very vivid, and the characters so far are intriguing! I would definitely recommend this book!

While not a fan of excessive exposition, I feel that it fits your story, for some reason. While leaving the man mysterious, you spend more time focusing on the world and the hints of politicks that I'm certain took many hours to plan in the preparation for publishing this story. So, as stated before, the sheer volume of prose and exposition is not to my taste, but I do understand how many readers would thoroughly enjoy this story. Please keep up the good work, and the reads are sure to follow, Author!

YOU HAVE ME INVESTED, AUTHOR-SAMA!!! TAKE MY STONES!!!! TAKE ITTTTTTTT!!! but anyway, I'm really interested in how you will bloom this awesome flower of a novel. Your work have inspired me and I wish wholeheartedly that you wont drop it. I will keep an eye out for your updates. As for plot and writing, you're a 5* no doubt!

Hello, dear author. I must say that I love what you have achieved with your story. So far very good development of the characters and the plot. Each chapter leaves you wanting to read more and more. Congratulations! Keep up the good work!

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This is actually pretty great. Love how the characters were introduced and the mc is so loveable XD The world building is well done and the story moves along smoothly. Totally worth the read! :D

The introduction was marvelous, I thought it was interesting. When beginning a book, you really want to hold the readers interest and focus, while keeping them entertained. I thought the author did a good job doing that here. It was very well written and very descriptive as well. That was another thing I really loved about this novel. Very captivating and very well written. I do recommend checking any grammarical errors though. I did catch a few while reading, but I think you could do that!! I recommend running them through online apps like Grammarly, or any other grammar error app you may can use!!! Good luck and well done!!! I want to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

Wow! the author has great quality writing, I like the way she writes the splendidly executed poetic lines. making me have the chills as I read it. A very easy and enjoyable reading to my part. I really like the story and this work was praiseworthy!

The plot of the story is intriguing. It's quite an interesting read. The background of the story is good, without boring the readers with too much details. The world building, in particular, intrigues me. I'll be following this work as it progresses.