Imperishable soul
One day, without notice, the world started changing. Cataclysms started rampaging across the world, monsters started to appear, and the geography itself of the whole world changed.
Between the victims of this change, there were the parents of a boy of 20 years old, and also the owners of the "Wright Company". David Wright took control of the company, preventing it from crumbling.
Years later he Awakened, and got a Trait! Traits are unique Powers that an awakener could have. Having it or not was dependent on your talent, and awakening it was totally on luck. Its trait was Book Maniac! It allowed him to reas each and every book, no matter the language, and enhance its effect.
There was a problem.
Skillbooks are books! He could not learn them, because he had to read them!
Motivated by the sense of vengeance and hatred for monsters, he started fighting, while searching for a way to obtain a skill to become powerful. But soon learning the skills was not anymore a way to obtain his revenge for his parents, but something he purely wished to achieve.
Years passed, and David used whatever means he had to achieve his desire. He even awakened a new trait, 'Imperishable Soul'!
But its effect were too much vague and he thought of it as useless.
He became old, and arrived at the end of his days without achieving his dream. In deathbed had an epiphany, but he was too much weak to put it in practice.
He died filled by regret and wishing for another possibility with all of his strength. It was then...
"uh, I died, Right? Then why am I Alive?"
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Uh, so, hi guys. This is my first novel. I'm not that good in english, but I'll do my best. Also, this story is just an idea that I had while reading various novel. And at first I didn't want to do something like this: writing my own novel. But, The idea of doing it kept bugging me. so, here I am. I have the general idea of where the novel has to go, but I don't have the chapters prepared. So I'm not sure if I'll be able to constantly update this novel. I apologize in advance. Anyway, I will try to do something I would like reading. There could be cliches, or it could lack originality.
Hi, Author here. I started a few days ago a story about a guy called Icaro Sabia. I wrote about 10 chapters, but then I started to think I made Him too much op. Let's be clear: I like Op MC, because I myself would love to be powerful, more than anyone. Call it a silly dream or just wanting attention, I just think human is by nature Greedy, and the thing I'm greedy about is power and uniqueness. I bet a lot of other people dreams about it, and is excited when he/she reads about a MC in which you can see yourself. The MC of this novel is, by any means, OP. I tried to rationalize his OPness, by not making it something he just obtains from a system. The power He Wields is His, and it's something he earned through hard labor. But hard labour without talent and luck is nothing. So of course the MC will be Talented and Lucky. I'll try to not go too much overboard, and if you have any tips for the story, I'll gladly take them. I'll try to write as much as I can, so that you will be able to enjoy the story, and you will not have to wait one week for only a chapter. I said I'll try to, but I have my own life and writing this novel is something that I'm doing for fun and to improve my English. anyway, let's go to the rating. Of course I'm doing my Best, but I don't think my Best is Equal to the best. If it was so, probably I would have quite a few of fan, don't you think? ahahah. Writing quality: I think that what I write is understandable, and I'll actively try to expand my dictionary. 3 stars story development: too soon to decide. I usually Let the story flow by itself. There will be almost no filler chapter where The protagonist is some random character that the MC encountered. At most, I'll Explain the story behind that side character if it's necessary. For now I'll give myself 4 stars. I like the way I develop my story character design: I suck at physical descriptions. But for the way the MC does things, the reasoning behind them and that stuff, I'll try to be as specific as possible. I'll give to all the Characters of the novel an actual character. Some could be stupid, others edgy, other just have an horrendous character. After all, out there exists people who is for real like that, right? 4 Stars updating: I already said about that. 2 stars world background: well... about this. I will describe what our MC sees or studies about. The Truth about the things that happened on earth will be explained with the progress of the story. The MC is after all actively searching for the "truth" behind the skills, which are powers granted by the System, mostly. Inevitably he'll discover the Truth about everything. I'll give myself a 4 for this one. But I'll try to transform it in 5. thank you for reading my novel. please tell me what you think about it.