The Lowly Gate’s Guard
Synopsis:
It’s been five years since the gates appeared, treasures and magic lay within.
However, where there’s treasure and magic, there’s monsters and deadly traps.
Dean is a university student that doesn’t have anything special about him.
As a security guard watching over the F gates, he gets paid just enough to cover his rent.
However, with dreams of becoming a hunter with no awakening, or natural talent for anything, the chances of him becoming a fully fledged hunter are slim.
Until, that all changes with one mistake.
Once again, the world has been thrown into turmoil.
Will Dean make it out alive?
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This novel is about a weak MC to strong MC.
If you’re also not into apocalyptic death games, this wouldn’t be for you!
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On a temporary hiatus (refer to most recent update chapter)
Chapters range from 1000+ to 1800+ words.
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Prefer to read on other platforms? I post on Royalroad, Webnovel, Wattpad and Scribblehub!
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Proof read by my Lovely Partner when she gets the chance.
I like the genre but cant come to relate to the mc. Sam trued to kill kim and he is just sitting around doing nothing??? Also did he not care to check in tabby he left her with a stranger and didnt go back to see her. Mc doesnt take enough action for my taste but that is a personal preference otherwise good story
mr author you have created a masterpiece, it should be a crime as to how this is not getting the attention it deserves, this is amazing, please mr author continue this, patience and hard work will soon be evident when this blows up
THE WORLD IS BESET ON (OMNISCIENT READER) NOVEL BUT WHIT WEAK GAY AND LESS GOOR AND DEAT
Novels with systems and rankings always make my interest aroused and start to confuse me after a while. You know, if I take a few weeks off reading; techniques, abilities, missions etc. give me a headache to remember. Author spends time and effort to create a world and naturally knows those things. However for us, poor readers, needs you to keep it simple as an advice if you let me give one. Great job author.
Nice story!! So far I'm in chapter 3 , but I have a bit of trouble following and , guess it would be more helpful to provide a bit of info about the wworl (maybe in notes) (could be because I am starting to read this genre which is different from the genres I normally read!) but in overall I like it very much and will continue to read it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend] thank you author for the new story!
You have done a good job representing the typical British humor, which is a very good thing. The design and world-building are consistent. Everything feels like they belong to the same work. However, the biggest mistake you've done is grammatical. The way you inconsistently switch between the past and present tense makes your story tedious to read at. Fix it and stick to only one tense. Some characters' physical descriptions, although may add more depth to the immersive experience, are relatively unnecessary at first. The reader's first impression of them in any given story is going to be the way they talk, what they do and who they are. They aren't going to care much at first about what they look like. The scenes transition too fast and the lack of a given environmental context make it hard to follow, especially if you describe the scenery in the middle of the scene. The reader doesn't have the mental image you as an author have. You must give it go them in a well-implemented manner, be it straightforward or more subtle, depending on your style. You also like to use words like "very". Please also get rid of that and look for a deeper synonymous. Example: "very tired" = "exhausted". Otherwise, the plot, although may appear stereotypical at first, has the potential to become something solid and smooth. Improve it and keep working on it.
Honestly author I'm actually surprised and disappointed that this novel has so little reviews, but don't worry author I'm very sure that as time progress your novel will gain more popularity. Stay strong author.
Hi, so far, so good. The inly problem I have is that I can't come to terms with the main character, and there are a lot of grammatical mistakes in your story. But otherwise, keep up the great work!
This story is so interesting! The background is explained clearly and easy to understand and the flow of the story is making me hooked to the next chapter! good job author!
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