Forcefully Kidnapped

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This books is good I like the intro/first chapter of the book. THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED the atmosphere in the place is awesome and the background story is great. You went straight into the story and did not start from the beginning saying so many years later and then begin the actual story. Instead you took the time to explain things when it needed to be explain.

The plot twists are awesome and very unexpected. For a first time writer it's a good start. Keep on practicing.

I love your story, I just believe that its a bit choppy but that is natural for some writers bc it is there style.  Anyway great job.  And PLEASE PLEASE update!! lol :)