A Coomer's journey.

A Coomer's journey.

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Author: KageCoomer
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Uzumaki Naruto has accomplished everything he had ever set himself out to do, all he wants now is to spend time with his family. Unfortunately, or you could say fortunately he is about to discover a whole new world unknown, as he slowly once again realizes what he really was put on this earth to do ... smash, all of the ninja world is his to conquer but first, he must tame his daughter Himawari who spends a little too much time bad-mouthing her mother.



The first arc with Himawari will mostly be from Naruto's point of view, future stories will alternate and show more of the other individual's reaction.

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KageCoomer
KageCoomer

Shameless review from the author here, Constructed Criticism is welcome as it is the first time I write this type of story. Let me know if you guys like this I have more chapters and an extended conquest ready. Happy COOMING.

4 years ago
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Escultor
Escultor

Reveal Spoiler

4 years ago
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Jacksunday
Jacksunday

Will you come back to continue the novel? Like I have been waiting for the next chapter for few months but there hasn't been any. You can even break the chapters in part to increase consistency.

3 years ago
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Cuerti
Cuerti

it was good, too bad you left it it was good, too bad you left it it was good, too bad you left it it was good, too bad you left it it was good, too bad you left it it was good, too bad you left it it was good, too bad you left it

3 years ago
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