nothing noteworthy, a trash character .. plots and dialogues that writer doesn't have the decency to write in full construct .
eyesore grammers and a whiny MC that ruins the whole franchise of the original world.
5 years ago
2
_EMI_
This story needs some editing. Other than that, it's all good. I hope it gets updated soon. Not many chapters have been released, yet the update frequency is already starting to suck. I'm worried that it'll get dropped.
5 years ago
1
Sculp
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
1
eccentricbeing18
Ugh... My head hurts reading this!
Brushed off details, boring isolated plot, unnecessary details, shallow characters, and grade school grammar.
I don't even know what kind of werewolf this is! Training arc and meeting malia but still no explanation.
And the **** was that about silver hair? It's a patch up frankenstein of a story and your already giving hints of future events??
Really??
I watched **** wolf and even I was confused of the lack of important information while adding weird ones that doesn't even have any explanation. That's me who watched it, what about those who don't??
Story telling of a grade schooler.
5 years ago
1
AstorothEverburn
Just wanted to say ThaT I Really Love These Type Of Books And Hope You Continue With This
Ngl Its On Par With Werewolf System & full-moOn system Keep it Up
I’ll Be Cheering For You
4 years ago
0
Hellcat1963
Everything great needs more updates though
Love the story
5 years ago
0
VladimierDraculTem
This is an awesome book and the development of characters and backgrounds are well done and even if the author declines I think he has an ultimate plan for the characters it is awesome
5 years ago
0
Nyeh_IamSkeletor
love it already hhshsshzhshshshswhhshshshshshshsjhsjsshsjshhshshshshsjssjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjssjdjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjssjsjjsjsjsjsjsjjs
Helper oc. i don’t like helper oc’s.
nothing noteworthy, a trash character .. plots and dialogues that writer doesn't have the decency to write in full construct . eyesore grammers and a whiny MC that ruins the whole franchise of the original world.
This story needs some editing. Other than that, it's all good. I hope it gets updated soon. Not many chapters have been released, yet the update frequency is already starting to suck. I'm worried that it'll get dropped.
Reveal Spoiler
Ugh... My head hurts reading this! Brushed off details, boring isolated plot, unnecessary details, shallow characters, and grade school grammar. I don't even know what kind of werewolf this is! Training arc and meeting malia but still no explanation. And the **** was that about silver hair? It's a patch up frankenstein of a story and your already giving hints of future events?? Really?? I watched **** wolf and even I was confused of the lack of important information while adding weird ones that doesn't even have any explanation. That's me who watched it, what about those who don't?? Story telling of a grade schooler.
Just wanted to say ThaT I Really Love These Type Of Books And Hope You Continue With This Ngl Its On Par With Werewolf System & full-moOn system Keep it Up I’ll Be Cheering For You
Everything great needs more updates though Love the story
This is an awesome book and the development of characters and backgrounds are well done and even if the author declines I think he has an ultimate plan for the characters it is awesome
love it already hhshsshzhshshshswhhshshshshshshsjhsjsshsjshhshshshshsjssjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjssjdjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjssjsjjsjsjsjsjsjjs
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