Naruto's Twin sister Hina

Up till now it is great. I love it. I hope it will continue to be great in the future. Character development is good. At first few chapter are short but as chapter increases its length also increases great.

You really really need a good translator or an editor Your grammar sucks tbh but the idea of your story is great and I guess its good if this is your first fic . Don't be in a hurry to post your chapters . Take time but at least post it with as less mistakes as possible .

I really love the story until now and the idea of making a younger sister for Naruto is very good and we can see thats it help Naruto and until now the story follow the mai story witH just the addition of Hina in the story.

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My man yogi...you got a great imagination and story writing skills.....really good one....we must create a chess manga.i am looking forward to that

The beginning of fanfiction interesting😊! But I would like more descriptions and dialogues... I hope this improves over time🙃. There are few chapters, so it is still difficult to judge the main character🌸.

The grammar and spelling have a few mistakes but overall still 👌👌 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Really good read with some minor language problems........ .. ................. .. ..... ......................................................

There is no system at all and some stuff just feel hum weird? not sure how to explain it ---------------------------------------------------

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