DC: The Shadow Monarch's Chronicles

okay, after 10 chapters, I'm hooked. has some comedy as well as action scenes. dont get me started how he shot batman in the balls that just was too funny. dont think I read a fanfic that fone that. Anyway, I'm not sure how your update stability is, but please dont drop this. also, hopefully, he will use his shadow powers soon, but please keep up the great work

AI becomes strong as of Chapter 31, but the whole unemotional act gets boring real quick. You originally portrayed him as this quirky, offbeat guy, not some sad, emotionless sop who can’t open himself up to love. A quirky 'human' with superpowered lovers could’ve actually made the slice-of-life and action parts more compelling. He could’ve been a fun contrast, even a vulnerable target like Lois Lane. I’m using romance as just one example of how his apathy makes everything feel hollow. I wouldn’t have minded if you at least acknowledged that he needs to grow. But instead, he’s out here chasing a soulless casual-sex lineup, like he’s trying to do the Batman playboy thing, but without any of the depth, charm, or underlying heroism. At least Batman has a purpose. He’s emotionally complex, driven by something bigger than himself. ur mc? He’s just coasting, empty, aimless, and pretending that detachment makes him deep. It doesn’t. It just makes him dull. You really fell from grace with this. Disappointing.

I wish it wasn't original. Why? Because the translator would have 200 untranslated pages that I could read. So with the tuner, I hope this masterpiece is finished.

A very heavy use of AI. It's very obvious and bad

The one night stand chapter killed any enthusiasm I had in reading this story, add to the fact it serves no purpose and makes Jinx character look like nothing more than smut material to use and forget about when you're done.

está god la historia me encanta y el protagonista me divierte no están cliché del prota poderoso en cerio me encanta diré solo cine

I really like this author, I even subscribed to the Patreon to read Garou's story in Akame Ga Kill and now he comes out with this story, damn it, he takes all my money.

Ashborn lets Jinx go just like that? Bah, I've lost all interest in continuing reading. I can't relate to a protagonist like that. Even though he's interesting and has a unique perspective, I honestly can't connect. The grammar is respectable. The stability update is consistent. The story development and worldview are quite solid and good. But my problem is with the character development. I honestly can't make that connection and immerse myself in the story. The comedic aspect of the novel is undoubtedly invaluable, and I often cried with laughter at Ashborn's actions. But I can't connect with his cold and indifferent side to generate real connections, and letting Jinx go without even caring was the final straw. So I'll sign off here. It was definitely a pleasure to read this novel, and I highly recommend it. GOOD LUCK 🍀

Love the story so far! It has lots of potential! Please keep it going! I like the way the MC does what he wants and doesn't just go the usual hero or villain route! He seems cool but not afraid to kill his enemies. I also enjoyed the way he messes with others like Batman and Superman/Supergirl. Especially the thing he did to Batman which was hilarious! I do have a question though. Will there be any romance in the fic? If so, will it be a single female lead or multiple?

This one is really Good. Author cooked again.

I held off reading this solely cause of the cover My bad I judged a book by its cover Do no be fooled by the comments claiming Ai and other nonsense. This is a rare fanfic that is fun without having to rely on objectifying the women in the series. It’s fun without having the mc be a lapdog for the original main characters of the universe. It’s fun. If you are tired of fics that are just too stress inducing or just plain smut- then this is the fic for you It made me laugh more times than I care to count So much so that, I felt compelled to write a review to share my thoughts with the class so that both the author and other potential readers can feel my appreciation for the authors work. Keep doing what you do Cause you be doing it well

The fanfic is still starting and hard to judge at the moment, but since it seems to be a comedy type without aura farming I am giving it 5/5. It has some unique approach to villain and heroes compared to the other DC fanfics I have read.

I love the story so far! It has a lot of potential! Please keep it going! I like how the MC does what he wants and doesn't follow the typical hero or villain route! He seems cool but isn’t afraid to kill his enemies. I also enjoyed how he messes with others, like Batman and Superman/Supergirl. Especially the thing he did to Batman, which was hilarious!

The story is fun and unique, I would recommend reading it. What it is not as of chapter 36: 1- It is not a harem or romance show. 2- No ridiculous displays of power despite the MC being the most OP 3- The Shadow Monarch's power usage is very limited and appears once every few chapters. 4- I read somewhere in the comments that the heroes will realize the MC is super power individual later in the story, chapter +50 maybe.