Ryougi Kazuya didn't know that this would be his last roll.
One moment, he was just another player trying his luck in Fate/Grand Order. The next, he was surrounded by flames, his cell phone exploding in his hands - and when he woke up, there was no hospital, no ambulance. There was only silence... and a strange sky over a city called Kuoh.
Reincarnated into the world of High School DxD, Kazuya finds himself trapped in a reality where demons walk disguised among humans, where fallen angels hunt in the shadows, and where the strong make the rules - or die trying to break them.
But Kazuya didn't arrive empty-handed. A unique power awakens within his body: Fate Gacha - the ability to summon, once a day, any resource from the Fate universe. From divine armaments to legendary heroes, everything is within his reach... if he's lucky.
Now, with the body of an irresistible young man but the misfortune of a doomed Lancer, he must fight to survive on a board where every move could be his last. Amidst supernatural intrigue, hidden wars, and girls who hide blades behind smiles, Kazuya begins to understand an uncomfortable truth:
In this world, destiny is not something you follow. It is something you defy.
Honestly? I have to admit: I did a great job with this Kazuya story. Mixing High School DxD and Fate/Grand Order is no easy task, especially when respecting the personality of each character, the tone of each universe and still adding my own style to the mix. But I managed it. My text carries that ironic lightness that I always admired in Rick Riordan's books, without losing intensity in the heavier and more dramatic moments. The relationships I built here... they are not thrown in, they are alive. The dialogues flow, the conflicts make sense, and each character — even the secondary ones — has their own voice. This is no coincidence. I dedicated myself to this.
Chapter 3 review (Couldn't help it, just wanted to complain.) Book’s decent tbh but the writing is just annoying. too many long explanations and pointless filler, kinda ruins the experience. Hope it gets better later on. 👍 p.s. Tone down the AI a bit maybe? just use it for grammar and stuff. Feels more natural that way.
My only complaint really is that its going a bit too slow for my liking, the MC didnt do anything so far, no action or anything, he didnt even test his abilities yet
Boring drama where nothing happens. Everything else is great. MC is great, even tho he is too OP for words... system is great, characters are great, world building is perfect! But it's a drama... a DXD drama... like what? Who wants to read a DXD drama? I don't.
In all these years in this Vital industry, this is the first time I give 5 stars. The MC is not an emotionless sociopath with a God complex, his relationship with the other characters is very fluid and despite being a harem, his interaction with the FMC is not superficial. Try reading it, I highly recommend it!
It’s great so far and I’m really enjoying the story and am looking forward to how it unfolds
Dude, I liked it. The protagonist shows up already killing it, and he’s not an idiot like Issei from the anime. The gacha part is kinda broken, but it’s fun to see what he’ll get next. I’m not really into long fanfics, but this one held my attention more than I expected. Are there some over-the-top parts? Yeah. But it’s a fanfic, so it’s all good. The important thing is that it’s not boring — there’s action, comedy, and some solid character interactions. It’s an easy read without needing to overthink things. If you just want to see a strong MC doing things right from the start, this fanfic is for you.
The story is great, and everything is going well. But one piece of advice, tone down the AI. Use to correct grammar and stuff. But if you do, still use it. After it generates the chapter, humanize it first by yourself and then by a humanizer.
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Ok acabo de terminar el capitulo 5 y todo lo que puedo decir es que es una muerda lo rotó que esta su habilidad de la tercera magia enserió si el fuese pensado en algo como los quincy de bleach qué tienen venas infundidas de energía espiritual caps de controlar el alma de las cosas o en los otsutsuki de naruto con sus ojos locos por que lo que dice es literal si yo lo quiero así es y si lo tengo siempre fue mio ni más ni menos Me encanta
Very good story in every sense. Good writing, good MC, the dialogues are very good and things are well developed. In short, it's worth reading.
Good and enjoyable work, I don't know what else to say. The characters are well written, the dialogues are normal, there are no problems with grammar. In general, everything is cool.
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With only three chapters, The Story of Kazuya already shows impressive potential. Even in its early stages, the fanfic manages to present a bold proposal: to unite two complex universes such as High School DxD and Fate/Grand Order without losing the essence of either of them. And the most remarkable thing: the author does not rely on long expositions or endless chapters to set the reader's mood — in just a few pages, the atmosphere is already established. The text is agile, with authentic dialogues and efficient descriptions that do not overwhelm the reading, but are also not superficial. The characters' personalities are respected in a surprising way. Ishtar sounds like Ishtar. Medb, with her charismatic arrogance, is impeccable. And Kazuya, despite being an original character, is not a generic self-insert: he has charisma, humor and a sense of identity of his own that makes him stand out even among deities and demons. Narratively, the story already makes it clear that it is not limited to a fanservice of unlikely encounters. There is building of relationships, hidden tension and an evident care to ensure that each interaction has weight. The internal conflicts and dialogues are, for now, the real highlight — and this, in three chapters, is a feat worthy of praise. If there is anything to point out, it would be the natural desire to see these elements expanded in future chapters. The foundation is solid, the writing is captivating and the premise is excellent. Now, I just have to hope that the author continues with this same consistency, because if in three chapters he has already managed to captivate me, what is to come promises to be even better.