Konoha: Starting the Game as Yoriichi

Tldr: OP MC graduated with Elite Jonin Strength who doesn't need anyone, doesn't need to think and plan, and with only sun breathing believe will streamroll everything. . it lacks depth, MC only care about himself and hinata, there isn't much interaction with other characters, the story is mostly about his training with Sun Breathing and flirting with 6 y.o. hinata, he doesn't interact much with other character, and doesn't have any thoughts or plan to change the plot. his goal is simply "The Strongest" at first he is potrayed as charismatic but latter he became arrogant, it looks like he believe that with sun breathing and transparent world he can defeat anything and His fighting style only use Sun Breathing, and it's boring, he doesn't incorporate any jutsu.

There are 100 past novels like this on the site. They are all the same copies of each other, their names change, the events are the same, the women he falls in love with are the same. This novel is no different, I expect it to disappear in the trash of this site.

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Just a translator for a chinese fanfic who can't even take out the chinese to make it a better read for others. I don't even know how all these chinese stories even got here, like why waste your time translating these shit, when you mostlikly can make something better 9/10 times?

Amazing job at a translation. It's so good. Please don't give up on this and who's the love interest?

dude this is the classic Chinese fanfiction, there no story of background and side characters, the plot move too fast, the dialogue and of course the mc what you expect from Chinese fanfiction

Writer, I hope you will continue to translate this series. Frankly, there are not many yorichi fanfics and I can say that this fanfic is quite successful, good luck in your work.

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its good bros 👍 slight spoiler about the FML bellow: would be cool to see how he deals with the main hyuga house tho hope he makes Hinata a super kage so she can be in charge of her fate

At this point it’s just bad writing, it’s sad to read. If it is Chinese, then you need to do a better job because this translation is appalling.

This is super good I’m on the latest chapter as of now (36) and I just hope he will always have the yoriichi template and instead of getting a new template it’ll help him make new sun breathing forms and helps him just improve all aspects of the yoriichi template instead but I really love this novel good work 😊😊

THIS IS PURE AND FRESH TRASH dont read this there is no charachter development random romance moments no one asked for and character depth? Whats that? This power scaling? Dead, dead in the water

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