"Please, Give me something good..."
[Craft Essence - Mapo Tofu]
"Fuuuck... Maybe the next one will be better?"
[Craft Essence - Mapo Tofu]
"DAMN YOU GACHA!"
[Craft Essence - Mapo Tofu]
"I didn't even roll that time..."
[I know.]
"Fuck you."
[Craft Essence - Mapo Tofu]
"..."
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First book, so cut me some slack. genz terms decrease around... chapter 9 or 10?
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All rights go to their respective owners, yadda yadda, enjoy. This isn't AI Assisted, so grammar issues may be prevalent. Don't be weird about it tho.
I mean, I am the author so mandatory 5 star for me, and also a warning for other reviewers. If you give this a 1 star for dumb reasons that isn't constructive criticism, I'll just delete it. Don't feel bad.
Just the fact he’s not summoning hero’s is great people always love dxd with fate characters summoned to me it doesn’t make sense in any other yea I can roll with it as long as the world isn’t basically the same history it’s good
Please do away with the over exaggerated gen z talk. It was fine for a couple of chapters, but it came on a bit too hard and started becoming annoying. remove that, and this has the potential to be one of the best dxd fics on here. people will pay to read this. but until then, it's just in the brainrot category.
The story itself is interesting, but the main character is always joking, every word is a joke, zero serious conversations, so all the chapters that are available are humor alone, zero any seriousness for this minus 2 stars.
Its quite good, the grammar is very consistent and the characters feel somewhat alive. But I genuinely cannot stand how much brainrot is in MC's behaviour. It was funny the first two chapters, but got old fast. Seriously, and I don't that he speaks like a gamer. No, he speaks like he's mentally ill, the retarded kind. God bless you, man. I'm giving this a higher rating than I should because its not a translation nor AI.
everything is good except the main character’s personality, he’s just constantly breaking emersion making the entire fic a comedy that just isn’t funny at all, he should be more serious maybe, or just not talk that much at all, the fic would be better if he was a mute
It ruined my brain. Not recommended if you want to keep your neurons intact. The main character is incredibly retarded and never shuts up.
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Don’t recomend if u don’t like System exposure Sissy main character (wearing heels) 🤢
i can tell you put in a lot of effort, but the moment u revealed the system to a stranger you have known for less than 24 hours. i could no long ignore ur flaws, terrible system, since it forces the story to go on a day by day basis, even when you are kid, and a good gacha stories would have a low possibility of even normal items appearing, not to mention op things, since you can do a timeskips easier. in ur story. 3 days in and hes already op and it does not appear to stop.
Two chapters, with just two chapters the author managed to keep me hooked on the story!! So far it's been phenomenal, I'm dying to see the next gacha that Mc will do. Keep up the good work author San! When the author is good he doesn't need AI or 1000 chapters!.
amazing, one of the best fate x dxd fanfic i have ever read. and plus, it have an amazing twink bussy MC 🤤🤤 that in it self is already 9/10 for me, and now this have a great story and writing, it also has shit ton amount of words per chapter. tldr; great femboy MC, great story and writing, long chapter.
I was wildly hit, I hope the author will not abandon the book but will continue to write so that there would be as many chapters as the Chinese and Koreans.
It’s entertaining very few Nemo/Noah fanfics out there (even though he doesn’t have the powers I would still kinda count it as one) also I just realized while writing this review dose he have arcade asencion 3 Noah hair (no blue highlights) or Nemo hair (blue highlights)
it's good I love the premise wasn't a big fan of the multiple nerfs to the system but wasn't that big a deal the story was even good enough for me to ignoring the constant gen z brain rot speak but where it really fell off for me was what began as a throw away joke about him maybe becoming more girly because of his new body and him not wanting to be a femboy at first it was funny and the first few times were just minor jokes but then author began to lean more and more into something that should have just been a throw away joke and began to actually play into it seriously and basic began to actually turn mc into a femboy if you're into that sort of thing then you'll probably like the story more but for me it went from a light hearted comedy into a horror story as we read about the mc's personality and thoughts being slowly corrupted and changed because of his new body without really noticing it.....if the author somehow incorporated that into the story later and had the mc realize how his mind is being influenced and his personality changed and does something like forcing the corrupted personality to fight the original mc then 10/10 stars i didn't expect it but if not well it's still an ok story just not for me