The Engineer from Naboo
In a galaxy far, far away, Padmé Amidala, the young and passionate senator from Naboo, fights for peace in a Republic on the brink of collapse. But fate has an unusual and powerful alliance in store for her when a man from another universe bursts into her life: Kaelen Ror.
Kaelen, gifted with the scientific genius of Rick Sanchez and haunted by memories of a past life, arrives in the Star Wars galaxy amidst political intrigue and the growing threat of darkness. Though cynical and pragmatic, Kaelen is irresistibly drawn to Padmé's nobility and determination. Together, they form an unlikely pair, blending Naboo's political wisdom with cutting-edge science from another world.
Their alliance becomes a beacon of hope as the shadow of Darth Sidious stretches across the galaxy. Kaelen brings impossible weapons, unexpected strategies, and a unique perspective on the Force, challenging ancient Jedi traditions and altering the course of history. From the sands of Tatooine to the corridors of power on Coruscant, their journey will be filled with epic battles, heartbreaking decisions, and the blossoming of a love that transcends stars and dimensions.
But his presence doesn't go unnoticed. The secrets of Kaelen's past haunt him, and the dark side lurks around every corner, tempting even the strongest hearts. Can Padmé and Kaelen protect their love and the galaxy from the encroaching darkness, or will his arrival from another universe be the catalyst for unimaginable destruction?
Prepare for an epic saga that blends the magic of Star Wars with the chaotic science of another dimension, where the fate of a galaxy hangs on the echo of another universe.
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AUTHOR YOUR DUMB THIS IS NOT A STAR WARS NOVEL IT IS A MULTIVERSE NOVEL BECAUSE MC IS RICK SON..I WANT TO SEE A RICK IN THE WARHAMMER UNIVERSE WHERE CHAOS RULES, OR CYBERPUNK 2077 WHERE TECHNOLOGY RULES MAY MAYBE RICK SON CAN CREATE A COMPANY AND CAUSE CHAOS, OR MARVEL RICK SON JOIN THE AVENGERS..OR MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE RICK SON CREATED A PLANET OF TRANSFORMERS AND TECHNOLOGY TO FIGHT THE REAPERS, THIS NOVEL COULD BE A MASTERPIECE AUTHOR.
Really meh. Too fast. Like, mc met Padme on way to Tatooine and somehow he "isn't the man she loved" right after victory on Naboo. Even Chinese MC's do not seduce that fast
OK, THIS IS FUN PLOT STORY. THE MC IS RICK SON. MAKE SENSE-This Novel Something Right The SHOW got WRONG,,, RICK WOULD NOT GO AFTER A DUMB WOMAN..RICK'S WIFE WOULD BE A GENIUS SUPER SMART..OK, WHY THOSE? THE MC visits the Warhammer universe and causes chaos or DC-MARVEL-MASS EFFECT-LAST OF US-WALKING DEAD-CYBERPUNK 2077-WITCHER-HARRY POTTER-TWILIGHT-VAMPIRE DAIRY-MATRIX-TERMINATOR-GOD OF WAR 4-FALLOUT-ONE PIECE-IRON GIANT-LORD OF THE RING-SUPERNATURAL-GRIMM-STARGATE-BUFFY the vampire slayer-XENA PRINCESS WARRIOR-tomb raider-FARSCAPE THIS WORLDS WOULD BE FUN TO CAUSE TROUBLE AUTHOR THANK YOU
I've already fixed the problem with the chapters being in Spanish and English, the fanfic is in English, I hope you like it 😜
this a mess of a story. not worth reading.
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From chapter four it’s in 2 different languages [img=Why]
it was fine until chapter 8. From that chapter onwards it is just a downward spiral.
This is just overall a good idea with terrible execution i can understand some of the decisions but other just fall flat. One of the main issues i take from this is the seemingly the mc proclivity to change everything he is on a dime he went from smart kid doing well on a test and flirting with padme to suddenly making dna targeting superweapons because he decided he wanted to end all war. Then he suddenly gets told by padme she is in love with him then abandons all plans and ideas on a whim this is just a bad combo of trying to be compelling romance but fails terribly, I can understand making qui gon put anakin in the pod race anyway because jedi can be asses about the force and panaka not wanting to use untested tech but where was the sense in just hiding there marriage in politics anakin hid his because he was a jedi the mc has no such issue I think you should take some time to learn pacing character development and interaction and story structure about how one decision can affect other thing also just use a mad scientist system the whole rick son plot just fell flat.
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I never thought I would ever see a rick and morty crossed with star wars. I'm here for it. the writing is really good. The science (at least the stuff that is based on real life) is on point. Tachyons for time travel messaging is so peak and perhaps not irl due to how theoretical tachyons are, but it fits with their general theory. Keep it up, I love it.
Very nice, particularly enjoy the early chapters. Went a bit crazy with the rick stuff, but I don’t hate it. Would have preferred a bit more of a local power fantasy though.
Nice story. especially in the star wars universe. Keep it up . .............................................................................................