Nolan wakes up in the chaotic world of One Piece—only to find himself on the brink of death. Just as despair sets in, a mechanical voice echoes in his mind
[Congratulations to the host for triggering 1,000 times critical hit!]
[Beautiful Face has been upgraded to Divin—]
This going to become interesting.
I'm bored as hell. Don't mind me. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
fun to read. try keep his strength balanced at least somewhat, it would be a bit weird to have him doing everything for the strawhats and luffy doing nothing.
A great story, it’s got all the right elements for a very entertaining adventure. Its hard not leave a spoiler on this review lol
okay, i got here because i was bored, but this is gold, 10 of 10 .......................................................................................
Plz don’t drop it. Is it raw or you writing yourself?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
great lazy character i love it good job author 👏👏👏
Chapters viewed: 17 The novel has an interesting concept in the first 5 chapters that reminds me a lot of One Punch Man or those novels where the protagonist is always comically misunderstood. I thought it would be like that, but the author seems to have other plans, and the truth is that it falls quite a bit in the other 10 chapters, since the protagonist solves everything with his gun and not with his beauty to create comedic moments. The writing isn't bad; perhaps it could use more explanation of the setting.
I don't usually give reviews. I do enjoy this quite a bit though. I hope you don't give up on it author.
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Although it only has six chapters right now, I still love the novel. keep up the good work.
This is a 1st I've never did a review before but so far I really like this story I hope u continue it and maybe jive him a critical with a devil fruit like a zion the fish fish model grate wight shark and jive him a critical hit so it can turn in to a Ancient type zion fish fish model Megalodon
I’ve never been much into fanfics, but this One Piece one really surprised me. The author managed to keep the original vibe of the series — adventure, humor, and that sense of freedom One Piece is known for. The original character fits in well with the crew and doesn’t feel out of place. I really enjoyed it and will keep following the story.
I love the idea of every mc you write is from the same family. so are they brothers or just reincarnation of the same person. I would like some lore about the family
This is a good fic 👍...and author can you please write titles to the chapters?...it just helps you know✌️🤝🙌
Man you can tell who has talent and who does not this story has everything you want out a one piece fanfic the writers good with the pen excellent story