Nolan wakes up in the chaotic world of One Piece—only to find himself on the brink of death. Just as despair sets in, a mechanical voice echoes in his mind
[Congratulations to the host for triggering 1,000 times critical hit!]
[Beautiful Face has been upgraded to Divin—]
This going to become interesting.
I'm bored as hell. Don't mind me. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
fun to read. try keep his strength balanced at least somewhat, it would be a bit weird to have him doing everything for the strawhats and luffy doing nothing.
A great story, it’s got all the right elements for a very entertaining adventure. Its hard not leave a spoiler on this review lol
okay, i got here because i was bored, but this is gold, 10 of 10 .......................................................................................
Plz don’t drop it. Is it raw or you writing yourself?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
great lazy character i love it good job author 👏👏👏
Chapters viewed: 17 The novel has an interesting concept in the first 5 chapters that reminds me a lot of One Punch Man or those novels where the protagonist is always comically misunderstood. I thought it would be like that, but the author seems to have other plans, and the truth is that it falls quite a bit in the other 10 chapters, since the protagonist solves everything with his gun and not with his beauty to create comedic moments. The writing isn't bad; perhaps it could use more explanation of the setting.
I don't usually give reviews. I do enjoy this quite a bit though. I hope you don't give up on it author.
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I’ve never been much into fanfics, but this One Piece one really surprised me. The author managed to keep the original vibe of the series — adventure, humor, and that sense of freedom One Piece is known for. The original character fits in well with the crew and doesn’t feel out of place. I really enjoyed it and will keep following the story.
At first I wasn’t gonna read this since it looked like a generic Chinese fanfic until I saw the list of other novels, then I knew this was gonna be peak🔥
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Man you can tell who has talent and who does not this story has everything you want out a one piece fanfic the writers good with the pen excellent story
This is a good fic 👍...and author can you please write titles to the chapters?...it just helps you know✌️🤝🙌
Pure gold for now at least. The comedy is great and the character doesn't break the world just by existing. Please do complete our one piece regrets in marineford war