Hellcome

This is a collection of horror stories. Pros: Some of the twists in there are amazing, especially Ch. 3! I'm not going to spoil it! Cons: Grammar! With better grammar, the story would be exponentially more enjoyable to read! And the style could be improved a bit. Neutral: Atmosphere. For some of the stories, it wasn't that scary. With atmosphere building, more of the setting can be described. However, the vivid description made up for it. Overall, great job. I enjoy it. This has potential.

A horror genre is sometimes real hard to write... And for me, this book gave me chills... I like the concept more... A different story per chapter... Nice... Hope you keep on continuing with this... Because I like it.. There are some mistakes here and there but, it is fine... :) :) Good Luck !!

i also liked thiis book one of my favorite and i like how the writer use words and idea..a must read books for all ages...i highy recommend to read this great book..

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I love a good anthology collection, especially with horror. It is never easy writing horror as a reader is less inclined to react like that of someone watching a horror film. Just by reading the first short story, I was entranced. It starts out like any horror scene, someone driving and then stopping and spotting some oddity. I did not expect what happened next but it thrilled me.

I'm loving this kind of story. Realy love the theme and all. Really loking forward to more chapters! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everything is nice and the vocabulary of the writer shows his control on the language . The plot of the novel is a bit new and I hope that i it will evolve more.

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