Untouched by the Outbreak

The starting is good.In the middle,so so,but the more i read,its getting better.I love they way you create a part where his lover dead.And i love how Ryo,your main character become after that.I like it when you make your character become aware on how selfish human can be on the zombie appocalypse.Well i was hoping this story getting better and better.Dont dissapoint me.

Well,to be honest,early story is good,Its not really that bad in the middle,but i think,this story is good for me.I was hoping you could detail more on certain part.Just my personal review,i think it worth unlock the chapter.By the way,keep up the work.

The start was nice, the background was actually interesting for me but the chapters were so short, and most of them were like fillers that you could skip and it won’t affect the story. The dialog of the characters were boring. Sorry but this is not for me. I wish you good luck author. I hope you improve and if possible you can rewrite the novel when that time comes.

Chapters too short, waste of free passes. Also, looks a lot like AI generated writing, am not even sure if the author himself is an AI or not

Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?

the story looks like it was written by AI. this could have been a good story but with over use of certain words that are out of place (MAKESHIFT ✊"✊") the constant reminder of his determination in the face of danger (when there isn't any given everything dangerous ignores him) and wasting time drove mad. Add onto the obvious use of AI to write the story ,misleading chapter titles and truely forced to the point of chocking plot railroading. I do NOT recommend this story.

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