you said this is a reincarnated MC but I don't see anything relating to it like what his wish and his future knowledge etc....................
4 years ago
30
Alef_Biersack
I'm never one to write negative reviews, but this story is asking, I don't recommend reading this story, it's at the level of a crackfic, the reincarnated MC acting like a child and thinking like one, going through the same suffering as Naruto but still treating Hiruzen like one a grandfather, if it were to manipulate I wouldn't say anything but it isn't, in the last chapter released, 22nd the author even writes a note saying that they are children, the guy was reincarnated and has memories so how can he be a child? I think people got dumber reading this story, if it weren't for these MC inconsistencies the story would be reasonably good, maybe above average depending on future development but as it is it's not worth the time it was written.
2 years ago
29
Lore_Gaming
MC has no brain cells. He yells at kurma for killing his parents but is ok with third hokage for breaking his promise. Garbage
definitely one of the best fanfic I have seen u should definitely read it.........................................................................................................................
4 years ago
3
Eternalladykiller
This is a reincarnated mc story?
Where is mc knowledge? His cheat? Why dose mc act like a child? Or think like a child?
Total waste of time
2 years ago
2
Just_A_Simp
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4 years ago
2
SupremadaRevolta
one of the best but stability is not that good but u guys can try it it is worth it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
apart from the name of the main character, which is generic and cringy, the rest is fine... change the name of the MC and everything will be normal.
2 years ago
1
MukomaTJ
I wouldn't want the author to be a slave to the same 'reincarnation' template we've seen recycled here a hundred thousand times, but I do wish they would commit to a lane. The MC is initially written as being aware of his special circumstances, but further into the story, the narrative seems to suggest that he's actually a little kid in his problem solving and his knowledge or his awareness of it and his experience seems to come and go. It's quite confusing. Hopefully, the author fixes that down the line
you said this is a reincarnated MC but I don't see anything relating to it like what his wish and his future knowledge etc....................
I'm never one to write negative reviews, but this story is asking, I don't recommend reading this story, it's at the level of a crackfic, the reincarnated MC acting like a child and thinking like one, going through the same suffering as Naruto but still treating Hiruzen like one a grandfather, if it were to manipulate I wouldn't say anything but it isn't, in the last chapter released, 22nd the author even writes a note saying that they are children, the guy was reincarnated and has memories so how can he be a child? I think people got dumber reading this story, if it weren't for these MC inconsistencies the story would be reasonably good, maybe above average depending on future development but as it is it's not worth the time it was written.
MC has no brain cells. He yells at kurma for killing his parents but is ok with third hokage for breaking his promise. Garbage
boring and passive mc and not worth reading
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Don’t waste your time mc is reincarnated with future knowledge but he has no brain cells it’s just stupid
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definitely one of the best fanfic I have seen u should definitely read it.........................................................................................................................
This is a reincarnated mc story? Where is mc knowledge? His cheat? Why dose mc act like a child? Or think like a child? Total waste of time
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one of the best but stability is not that good but u guys can try it it is worth it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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apart from the name of the main character, which is generic and cringy, the rest is fine... change the name of the MC and everything will be normal.
I wouldn't want the author to be a slave to the same 'reincarnation' template we've seen recycled here a hundred thousand times, but I do wish they would commit to a lane. The MC is initially written as being aware of his special circumstances, but further into the story, the narrative seems to suggest that he's actually a little kid in his problem solving and his knowledge or his awareness of it and his experience seems to come and go. It's quite confusing. Hopefully, the author fixes that down the line