Marvel : I'm in Westview Town

nice author keep it up upload moreee all the best 👍

He loves the way he's leading the story and portraying Wanda as someone who is overcoming vision. I loved the interaction between peter and wanda, peter needs an aunt/or older sister, or even an uncle lol if he meets may parker, wanda helping peter or even clint in the hawkeye series would be really cool

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Hmm...so this guy is gonna approach Wanda and say "Oh? You want to have a family?"

This is a translation from a Chinese fanfiction novel not sure why the author is not giving credit to the actual creator or putting the link of the original novel here and saying that’s this novel a just a translation.

This is one of the dumbest and the most stupidest stories I’ve read as of yet. It’s like CW Flash, where the superhero does the most stupidest brain dead thing, and just stand there and let things happen when he could’ve stopped with a single thought. Simrahi Wanda powerhouse just stands like a dog. She does nothing. And MC just shows off here and there. Nobody acts like their character. And Peter starts calling Wanda, the strongest adventure out of nowhere. Goes on and on everything is just there is no thought behind a single word this book

It’s a decent story but there are a lot of racist undertones. ………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..

Honesty question author….. what’s the point of you having the R-18 tag on your story when there is basically nothing that refers to it? All the sexual and forplay scenes in the story are just being skipped over and not written out, the lack of explicit content in this story is high for you to say it R-18. If you’re not gonna write out the sexual scenes in the story please remove the tag. Now you’re just baiting reader who started reading the story because a lot of persons would have been interested seeing the R-18 tag

translations gets worse and worse. Other than that the story is jumping around a lot

Well where to start, first this is a Chinese translation and we all know how they are. Bunch of racism, annoying Chinese mc, stupid cultivation powers, young masters, and girls more bland the flour. do yourself a favorite and don't read it not worth it at all

The premise is decent, but the execution is flawed. The main character is lazy and doesn't do anything to preempt the story until he is forced to. Even when he has a great power for planning ahead. The story is 80% flirting between him and Wanda. Which wouldn't be so bad if every other sentence he wasn't calling her Witch here Witch there. I don't think he has referred to her by name ever. It comes off really weird, especially since in the US, if you call a woman Witch, it is generally an insult and not an endearing term. IDK, I just don't like it. TLDR: MC is lazy and calls Wanda Witch every sentence which is annoying.

the beginning was good, then it turned ok, and then oh god, and then no, and then wtf.... you get the gust right? it's a Chinese translation book......and the original author is smoking 🚬

Interesting concept, the system goal is to be a low key, act secretly so no one recognized him. The start pretty good, but after he have relationships with wanda, everything goes downhill. All the chapters just about him flirting with wanda. One or two chapters is acceptable but this author writes them flirting every chapter as long as these two people appear in the story. So kinda annoying. Then the task from the system kinda abandoned by MC. In the start he kinda lazy and smart. Act secretly so one recognized him. But in ch 70, mc suddenly act dump and reckless. In the start he just want to stole the "forgettable spell" and several spell from kamar taj. But Author suddenly makes MC a retard, make a force plot so the multiverse plot can be written. He with his genius idea, using the forgotten spell in front of Dr.Strange. wong and sterling. Instead of escaping after he stole the spell, Instead of act secretly, he used it in front of them. A retard, dump and stupid decisions from an MC with a goal to act secretly and be a low key mc.

Don’t read this , just waste and loose your time. Drop………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………)00)0)0(0(0(00(0((0(0;0;00;0;0;0;0;0;0;0;00;0;0;0;0;0;0;000(0(0(00(0((