It was Iya's birthright to become the next Commander of the infamous Sagen Army and their purpose was to restore order working alongside the Star Lord and the Twelve Queens. Together only they could bring peace. Raised to be the best, she was on a path to becoming a legend, until she falls for the she cannot be with. Together, against all odds they risk everything to stay together. Even if that means going against her own people. The consequences of their love lead them down a path of death and despair. A path of no return...
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author made this novel. It was awesome 😂 🙈 😄 ... Welp readers, read it to find out why. Hehe
Really great story! I feel like I was in the plot and I was seeing everything! Synopsis is interesting too. Great job author! Keep up the nice work! I cheer you/
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