Hanging onto the branch to Heaven, a man made his choice. Living or dying, he has secretly brought a new world onto himself. With nothing but fear and uncertainty, he pushed forward. At the cost of his loved one.
Gender bender first you had my curiosity now you have my erec~attention
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4 years ago
5
hhao
WoW this is amazing. if there are ideas with crazy potential for making wonderful stories this has to be one of them. Hope you can keep up with the quality of these first 2 chapters. Good job!.
For any readers wondering whether or not to read this I can only tell you to give it a chance. If you are a fellow fgo player, you will most likely feel the weight of the possible consequences of this start for the story as well as the many directions thand I think it is amazing. I don't think reincarnation could be made more tragic than this but, when made like this it opens up so many possibilities for character development. I don't usually write reviews but this story lit a fire inside me.
My best wishes for the author.
4 years ago
4
Cyanta
I really like this concept and the story is going really good, If the author updates I recommend adding pov changes as it gets a little confusing to guess who's pov it is without them.
4 years ago
2
Deep_Shallow_Pond
You forgot to add genderbender tag. Please do so.
G̶͖̼̜̈̍́͐̃̍̀̆͝ė̵̡̗͙͚̓̋̉͑́̈́͑̃̍̐̕͠n̴̖͍͉̊ͅd̷̝̦̝͔̼̦̦̰̼͓͚̲͔̹̮͋͑̀̅̒́͌͊̿͗̉̏e̷̛̝̦͕͉̭̰͔͆͐̏r̵̯͖͐͂̓̈́͐̂b̴̢͖͚͖̝̠͉͙̲̲̖̙̫͐̈́͌͗͗̈̆̀̈̊̓̄̈́̕͜e̷̙̦̜͖͈̻͇̜͓͂͗̑̍̐̀͋̈́̓͝n̸͚̘̜̲͙̹̽̈́̒̑̂̒̄̓̃̀̈́̚d̴̠̞̖̥̯͎̃̔̆̓̈̾̚̚ē̴̛̛̥̲̐̀̎̅̄r̵̨̞̗̦̗͖̻̲̝̪̣̱̫͂̑͗̈́̉̉̏̈̌̃͘͝͝
Gender bender first you had my curiosity now you have my erec~attention ................................................................................
WoW this is amazing. if there are ideas with crazy potential for making wonderful stories this has to be one of them. Hope you can keep up with the quality of these first 2 chapters. Good job!. For any readers wondering whether or not to read this I can only tell you to give it a chance. If you are a fellow fgo player, you will most likely feel the weight of the possible consequences of this start for the story as well as the many directions thand I think it is amazing. I don't think reincarnation could be made more tragic than this but, when made like this it opens up so many possibilities for character development. I don't usually write reviews but this story lit a fire inside me. My best wishes for the author.
I really like this concept and the story is going really good, If the author updates I recommend adding pov changes as it gets a little confusing to guess who's pov it is without them.
You forgot to add genderbender tag. Please do so. G̶͖̼̜̈̍́͐̃̍̀̆͝ė̵̡̗͙͚̓̋̉͑́̈́͑̃̍̐̕͠n̴̖͍͉̊ͅd̷̝̦̝͔̼̦̦̰̼͓͚̲͔̹̮͋͑̀̅̒́͌͊̿͗̉̏e̷̛̝̦͕͉̭̰͔͆͐̏r̵̯͖͐͂̓̈́͐̂b̴̢͖͚͖̝̠͉͙̲̲̖̙̫͐̈́͌͗͗̈̆̀̈̊̓̄̈́̕͜e̷̙̦̜͖͈̻͇̜͓͂͗̑̍̐̀͋̈́̓͝n̸͚̘̜̲͙̹̽̈́̒̑̂̒̄̓̃̀̈́̚d̴̠̞̖̥̯͎̃̔̆̓̈̾̚̚ē̴̛̛̥̲̐̀̎̅̄r̵̨̞̗̦̗͖̻̲̝̪̣̱̫͂̑͗̈́̉̉̏̈̌̃͘͝͝