The Replay

This is a pretty interesting work where the author uses time skips and jumps effectively to make the reader feel interested in finding out the continuation to the next part. The characters seems to be developed well and has their own consistency when it comes to being written, definitely proves how much the author has put into the depth of each character to make the reading experience a fun and excitable one. I think it has the potential to reach even higher as long as the author keeps pushing out consistent chapters and it will be a banger once everything is pulled together

My friends, I must say this novel is quite interesting. I didn't expect to be so interested in what will happen next in Leng Mo's life, and that all happened when I read only five chapters!! Damn... Well, anyway, I came here to write a review, but for now, there are too few chapters. And with that in mind, I'll only say one thing I liked and one thing I disliked till now. - What I liked - The protagonist of the story, Leng Mo: Till the chapter I read, the fifth one, what I can say about him is that his personality is shit. He is too proud, lazy, and rude as hell. (Probably due to how he was raised.) Heh, you might wonder why I like him, and the answer would be that I want to see how he will change along with the novel, I want to see how much Gu Chen Ri will change him!! (I think that's her name) - What I disliked - The flow of the story: In some parts, it really bothered me... Example: He was dining in his house, and then 'suddenly' he was on the streets... and then "bam" someone bumped on him. It's nothing that serious, but personally, I didn't like it. (It's also nothing that spoils the fun.) And with these two points, my review ends... for now... (And sadly, all I can do now, is wait for more chapters~) (Jandee~ Please continue with the good work!!)

The story is very interesting with an interesting premise. The time skips are used as a story progression tactic and do not feel like forced exposition. The characters are well-written and realistic. Best of luck to the author

Ok. I actually like the time skip consistency and the fact that the author is willing to elaborate on where and when it is right now in the text. The story in itself is mysterious and luckily does not feel infodumpy at all. And again, thanks for making it clear that we skip to a family dinner a while ago etc. it improves the reading experience greatly. However, please, try to write without including song lyrics. As for the general feeling of the language and the characters, it is clear that the author has written before. There aren't too many errors, the flow is enjoyable, and the characters are lifelike and perhaps it is better that they are not caricatures? I think most readers will like reading this if they have come this far.