I love it. this is so awesome. i was like how but soon when i read the plot twist i was surprised. Amazing story devolpoment and background.
4 years ago
2
Jafar_Mustafa
Even though this is the first update this person nailed it. I loved the little backstory and the way he turned the story upside down. This guy has potential to achieve great heights. Can't wait for another update.
4 years ago
2
McKenna_Zwonitzer
I LOVE IT SO MUCH CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! You are such a talented writer, and I can’t wait to see more of you. I loved what you did with the whole chapter the next one is going to be just as amazing I know it!
4 years ago
1
Abbas_Mustafa_6700
A sensible and a mature writing.
I think I know this writing style.
Have also read your "Modern Avatar".
Looking forward for the next update. Some action and suspense is awaited
I love it. this is so awesome. i was like how but soon when i read the plot twist i was surprised. Amazing story devolpoment and background.
Even though this is the first update this person nailed it. I loved the little backstory and the way he turned the story upside down. This guy has potential to achieve great heights. Can't wait for another update.
I LOVE IT SO MUCH CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! You are such a talented writer, and I can’t wait to see more of you. I loved what you did with the whole chapter the next one is going to be just as amazing I know it!
A sensible and a mature writing. I think I know this writing style. Have also read your "Modern Avatar". Looking forward for the next update. Some action and suspense is awaited