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Hi there, please read Fate; Unlasting and add to collection. Thanks.
Time is of the essence
Magic runs supreme in this brutal fantasy world, and not all is straight forward. Follow the characters who are the heroes of their own story as they strive to fulfill their destiny... only, not all can.
The fate of the six races are altered drastically in the aftermath of the great war that left many clans decimated, and the balance of power has now shifted to the humans.
Underground schemes threaten to unveil a great evil, one the world won’t be able to take.
The past and present will have to collaborate to ensure there will be a future at whatever cost necessary.
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The story line is interesting and your characters also. You're doing great job! I liked movies like Butterfly Effect, Minority report, Inception, Back to the future, etc... and I am happy that somebody is going in the direction of changing the past... You have a great idea! I hope that you can cope with the (difficult) topic :)
Who's got a time loop when you need one? I know! This story right here! I am still to read all of it - so I added to my library but so far - oh boy! The character construction is done carefully and it is not over the top. By the 3rd chapter, you are already emotionally invested and truly happy for the time loop. Some English vocabulary polishing is needed here and there - but this author has a good sense of his story and I feel he invested time into developing it - he certainly manages to get the user immersed.
Good story so far, and the pacing and build up of the story has been nice. Hope the author continues to flesh the story out properly. Nice work.
Love the concept of the novel. The first few chapters really keep you intrigued the whole time, especially the first chapter. Really well written!
I am a fan of the slow build. It kind of grabs your attention, because it slowly reveals the plot. Gives off a “Happy Death Day” vibe that I really like, and the first chapter does all the cool foreshadowing. I like it. It is different and attention-grabbing, and the MC makes just enough stupid decisions to create the necessary tension.
The flow at the first chapter is good. The characters are likeable. I won't point out the minor grammatical errors since it is unnecessary. I wish this book a good luck! Cool book cover by the way.
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Top quality story here. Got a real sense of Groundhog Day. Always an interesting concept. The mystery surrounding the bombing is also an excellent hook for for the reader. I look forward to reading this as a complete work. Great stuff so far, and I really see it building up to something spectacular.
Really interesting concept! Also I love the peaceful beginning, and the suspenseful setting that comes after hehe. The author did a great job in painting the atmosphere as well and I love how the author portrayed the character's interaction too, looking forward for more, author! <3
Well, the concept is kinda new to me. I'm intrigued, man. Here's wishing to read for more! But if it's possible, space some paragraphs eh? Sorry for my defective eyes, it can't read many small letters cramp in one paragraph. But it's good. The concept got me hook. Looking forward to how it will come out. Great job author!
The story was nice and smooth to read. Its story was captivating and heart racking that made me focus on what is happening. The only problem I can point out was to make your narration to become paragraphs. That way, it will not be cut halfway. You can check the first chapter yourself and see that it was forcefully cut. But all in all, It was a heartwarming story. Endearing and splendid.
Hey! I love the story so far, its really heartwarming right from its prologue, PRO TIP- DESIGN A NEW COVER! it'll help reach out to readers, truly underrated, ill be taking notes because the writing is brutally nice Now
The writing quality is excellent though, some paragraphs are long but it's a matter of preference so, no problem with it. The start of the story is quiet enjoyable. Though, I sometimes read romance but I'm looking forward to future arcs.
Hi guys, sorry for the BIG delay in updating chapters, my device got stolen and I'm just managing in school, will continue updating once things get sorted. Peace!!
The premise of the plot really intrigues me and the description of it really encapsulates what you're trying to portray and the pacing could be a problem but to me it's fine.