Talent System In Naruto

grammar is too bad making it difficult to read otherwise story seems good as of third chapter but sadly Im not willing to read more because of grammar

Good idea and nice nice start. The grammar, though, is terrible and I just can't read it. I takes courage to try and post though and I commend you for that. Try finding someone to help with your grammar.

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Interesting summary and idea which has a lot of potentiol however the grammer is awfull and doesnt make any sense words words wordS 140 charecters

Really good so far, love the few changes that you are making comparing to the original story. If you keep this pace(1 chapter per day or so) this will be an interesting read.

i like this novel idea, thou still in beginning stage. dont disappoint us! dont drop pls ty[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Really fresh idea for me upgrading and changing the power of original characters good story writing and character depth is little but its okay it just fan fic who gives shit good luck (English not my languages sorry if you have headache reading this )

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The story is messed up from the very beginning. Every major naruto character starts of the same age. I don't understand what the author was hoping for, but he dropped the novel and that speaks for itself.

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‘English isn’t my first language “ so you know this is about to be a masterpiece

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